Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

MG OS:"Kehna Hi Kya"Pt 3/New Note Pg 49/69/24th March - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
you are continuing know, please  do not stop in middle  please

  rote rote me hall to dekho, kasie hogya, isleye next part jaldi se updatekarlena please
nahi... to...   i will  come into your dreams and will not let  you sleep

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Posted: 11 years ago
WOW, Lajawab tha. Too Good. Am speechless. 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
Please Please Maan ka POV bhi de do. And haan Happy Ending to banta hai na. So I demand 2 more parts. Samjhi. 1 part me finish mat karo.
anuandavi thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Waise Muskan k twins ka naam Maansi and Yash he. Jay nahi.
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Posted: 11 years ago


  wow lovely update dear...i love tis os so much...lovely cute os...i love my maaneet's love in tis os.lovely cute...i love it so much.
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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful os 
even without any words exchanged between maaneet it was such a beautiful love story 
plz do update another part 
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome os ,, loved how u expressed their feellings so well 
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Posted: 11 years ago
its awesome please continue thankyou
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow an OS n thst too a beautiful one.
At first I was a bit sad that u have written
an OS as i desperately wanted an update first for
Life starts Where it ends. I simply wanted that
First as I can't wait for Maan n Seher moments.
But after reading it I don't have any complaints.
U made me speechless. But I want an update for
That ff next. I know I m greedy but wat to do u
Write such beautiful ffs.

Now coming to OS. Geet's fantasy is becoming
Reality. Every scene she has thought is happening
Wid her. Hawww. She blushing.

The way she met him, staring at him, geting lost
Everything was dreamy.
She has fallen for Champ. Their every meeting
Holds something important in their life.

Widout conversing verbally they fall in luv.
That's the best thing I liked. It actually they
Were speaking thru eyes, thru their hearts.
Love don't need words.

"And then by the end of this wedding I might will fell irrecoverably in Love with him nd one more saga of Love will embed in the history of Love "
Loved this line.

Now I also want an epilogue for this.
N thanks for dedicating this to us.

Continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
just awesome dear...it was jst wonerful and the song...it was tough to say that \os was written for song or son for OS
 
and thanks for the dedication...u r a brilliant writer dear...