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Arshi SS: A Mistake. Update#3-pg28 (Page 34)

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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 12:54pm | IP Logged
Wow fantastiic yaar...Clap

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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 1:45pm | IP Logged
superb updt

updtt soon

thanks for pm

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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 1:53pm | IP Logged
Thank you so much Subha sree nanda for the link.Its really apreciate I was looking for this one.It was you send me the link and I read first part and second part.

Evilmindedme really I don't have to express how splendid mind blowing update was this one.You are really blessed and you really did justice to the character Arnav.The feelings the various emotions which dances in his mind, heart and his head...from the fear, then the truth which really felt him someone a knife on his heart, then the frustration, anger, the cheated by those two ladies, then the pain then the heartache, then how Asha gave him relief, then calm, his mind and heart starts to work, the clear picture what happened, then anger changes to guilt, then the love and respects again blossoms, then the reentry of ASR, the way he starts to sort out things...fabulous(May be I miss something)
Wonderful twist La was going for ask divorce she already forwarded paper for the same.I can't imagine Arshi separated, thanks for this wonderful twist.It will take time for Khushi to forgive him but just give hi a chance..

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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 1:54pm | IP Logged
what an update ClapClap..no words to define it...it is mindblowing...

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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 2:16pm | IP Logged
Omg!!!

This just keeps getting better and better!! Smile

When I found out/ figured out Lavanya was his wife I was sad that Arnav went off and had a child and all. But I have nothing against La or her son to be clear.

I was just sad that maybe because of his and La's son hell refrain from trying to get Khushi back, but there's a whole different story going on here!

Lakash isn't even his son! Who's son is he then?? And Khushi knows this? How is Khushi so Okay with everything? Why won't she listen to La? And La? What's going on in her pretty little mind?

Anyways back to your story Tongue I loved the father daughter scenes! From her comforting him to the story telling! Everything she did made him see Khushi in her! Embarrassed

And the drawing! Please let this be a sign that Khushi's still in love with him but just has too much self respect for herself to go back!!

So continue soon!!! Big smile

Edited by Arina_R - 25 September 2012 at 1:29pm

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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 2:25pm | IP Logged
hie/..:)
dis was my 1st visit 2 dis stry..:P
well neva new abt it..:)
so nw..
m in2 it..
okay..!!!
3 long chptrs..
3 painful chptrs..
full of hidden lov..
pain..
a bit of hatred...
lots of innocense..
n soo much more..:)
btfl stry..:)
well..
wt i cnclded afta ol dis..
Khushi still loves Arnav..no mttr wteva he did n accused her of..
its juz dt Khushi z bothered abt La n Laksh..
..
it seems Asha knows much more dn wt Arnav thinks she knows..
Arnav desrves dis treatmnt 4m Khushi..
4 bein soo bad wid her..
4 throwin  her out of his house at 20..n bein pregnant..closin ol doors..
still lot 2  c..
hw La n Khushi met/..
who's Laksh father?
whrs Anjali..?
wt happnd wid Shyam?
wt ol Asha knows abt Arshi.?
...
well soo many questns..
n ans.s r juz wid u..:)
m lovin dis stry..:)
 
 
do pm me wen u update more..TongueTongueTongueTongueTonguethnxxSmileSmileSmileSmile

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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 3:16pm | IP Logged
a very well-written and deeply emotional update... loved the see-sawing of emotions felt by arnav when he realised how much he had wronged khushi and lavanya... wondered why he didn't have as deep a bond with laksh as he had with asha and was afraid he would favour one over the other, which wouldn't have been good for either of the kids! thanks for clarifying things... still there's an ocean of hurt still in store thanks to arnav's mistrust and suspicions! kudos to you for such a mature take on relationships

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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 3:25pm | IP Logged
Yaar it ws jus too good...i mean jus WOW!!!!!!!!!!!! There is no better ss i've read till date in INDIA-FORUMS...the best of writers in this forum cud not do dis wt ur ss has done...it has made me cry actually in the middle of the night at 3am!!!!! It ws outstanding...i dun have words to express it...plz plz plz pm me weneva u update...i'l be waitin eagerly and u knw i'l wait patiently coz i'm sure after reading those updates that it'll be worth the wait...so plz do pm me wheneva u update..

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