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Arshi SS: A Mistake. Update#3-pg28 (Page 33)

arhi101 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 11:11am | IP Logged
for a strange reason im happy laksh isn't arav's son
awesome update dear
loved how the past is coming out
seems like khushi and lavanya is hiding something big
continue soon
thanx for the pm

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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 11:35am | IP Logged
Fantastic update

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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 11:45am | IP Logged
Thanks sweetie for the note at the beginning of the update...but let me reiterate that the pleasure's mine...i was more than happy to share your story and im sure that all my buddies enjoyed reading it as much as i did...

Complex emotional update...but loved the way you paced it...how you showed arnav getting upset n angry at the betrayal, n then progressed gradually to make him realise how wrong he was, how he had misunderstood n how he was to blame for everything...the whole thing was beautifully written...

Der aaye par durust aaye ...in your case...lamba chaudha aaye...
So happy to read a nice long update...mostly people write very short ones...

Its a lovely story n intriguing too...where is anjali, where is shyam, who is laksh...cant wait to find out...

Also...please give us a little of khushi's pov as welll...im sure she is missing him n longs for him but is too upset with him to do anything abt it...

It was a fantastic update and im looking fwd to a lot more quality writing from one of the most talented newbies in the ff world of india forums...

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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 11:48am | IP Logged
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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 12:04pm | IP Logged
great, like to know how it ends, please send up dates

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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 12:18pm | IP Logged
superb update honestly loving the story
i love the friendship and contentment that both khushi and lavanya have with each other, they both are truely best friends and are their for each other through anything
bit baseless for arnav to try and blame khushi and lavanya for what they did, good his demon came knocking to tell him all about what he had done
aand finally he remembers the past, pieces the pieces together, realised that he had thrown her out when she was pregnant, said awful things to her, and what not, tried to ruin her life
the last convo i think is a great time for arnav to walk in and listen too as he can realise the truth and hurt and whatever else these two women are feeling about their situation and him

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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 12:21pm | IP Logged
Simply awesome

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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 12:50pm | IP Logged
Oh my god! I am so glad that  SubhaShreeNanda  sent me a PM to your story! It is so intriguing!! I want to read more! 

Your writing style is very grabbing, I like that you use third person and first person for inner thoughts, and the way that you write, makes the reader feel the character's emotion. It's beautiful. I swear I had a lump in my throat reading the third chapter! 

I'm so glad that I gave it a chance and I can't wait for the next 'un. 

Update soon!

[P.S. a little tip: maybe you title should be ARHI TS: A Mistake. ... so that IPKKND fans can find the story. There are thousands of stories on the Fan Fictions page that it's hard to pick out the ones that don't specify which fandom they are for :) ] 


Edited by -kitti- - 24 September 2012 at 12:50pm

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