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Arshi SS: A Mistake. Update#3-pg28 (Page 31)

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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 7:32pm | IP Logged
beautiful story.. i read the three parts.. and i felt like a roller coaster ride.. i feel extremely sorry for what lavanya went through in these past 4 years of indifference from the person you love the most and Lakash he is going to loose the father he thought was his..

lavanya deserves to move on and have someone who loves you and live her life.. instead of being with Arnav who never would or could love her.. not even out of guilt..

loved the whole story.. i was getting agitated the way he spoke about lavanya in start and then how he was going to khushi without thinking of how lavanya was feeling.. he was doing the same thing he did to khushi.. years ago.. but then slowly i got to know that he never loved lavanya and he was indifferent to her.. so it was not a change for her to not see him with them at home..

beautifully written.. both the women you have showed are the strongest ever.. one endured everything alone and couldn't stop loving the man who threw her out at the middle of the night claiming that she slept with his brother-in-law and one who knew everything including khushi's existence that meant arnav would go to her the moment he gets to know and still be a friend to him that he never had..

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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 9:15pm | IP Logged
Fantastic update...Smile
Amazing twist...Loved it..

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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 9:57pm | IP Logged
Wow...nice twist...thnx for d PM

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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 10:00pm | IP Logged
wow !!
great job Wink

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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 10:39pm | IP Logged
amazing amazing amazing dear. muaaahhh lovely update and thanks for the pm dear

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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 11:04pm | IP Logged
Amazing update dear!.really loved the way the story is proceeding.and i'm also happy that u have decided to extent the threeshot.
Felt bad for arnav,khushi and lavanya.bt then there is asha.the love she has for her baba whom she has nt even seen before that day.she remembers every single thing that khushi has told about him.just loved that child.

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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 11:21pm | IP Logged

OMG
OMG

this was one of the best-est story i have eva read
i cried on the second part where asha said i like doin everything by my own as moma does as no one helped her. man i did cry 

and the last part was jus awosome mind blowing

i knew laksh wasnt his son buh man i wish if was an acutal show to watch buh i loved reading it i am sure i wouldnt hav even enjoyed watching it this much

loved arnav's tumoril at the end when he thought they both were traiotrs and den how he convinced himself that he ddnt give them any choice other than betrayin him.

man loved it loved it
it was so emotional and heart arching

well done man
superb job

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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 11:22pm | IP Logged
and love i forgot to add can u plzzz pm me if u write more ffs plzzz i would love to read it man ur jus awosomeee

jazzz

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