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Arshi SS: A Mistake. Update#3-pg28 (Page 27)

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Posted: 14 September 2012 at 11:49am | IP Logged
that was a nice twist... even I had believed the woman to be anjali but later began to suspect it was lavanya... what I am interested in learning is whether khushi knew of the arnav-lavanya relatioship... was she instrumental in getting them together... loved the scenes of arnav's guilt and remorse... but kudos to you for maintaining khushi's strength of character and that she doesn't forgive him easily nor accept him back

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Posted: 14 September 2012 at 12:53pm | IP Logged
gosh! this is beautiful!!

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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 8:01am | IP Logged
Okk
** Taking a looong breath**
Done 
No no not done yet
**again taking a looong breath**
okk I am back to my normal state
WTH you have done!!! 
This took my breath away
See,I can't breath now properly? And all this because of you huh I hate you
You are planning to murder me,nahh???
LOL
Amna Amna Amna jaaaniii it was awesome awesome awesome...once I started to grow a feeling like Asha,Arnav they really do exist in the real world and I can see them!! feel them!!!
Amna iss feeling ko kya naam doon??
tune kya kar dala!!!!
Clap Clap Clap
I am proud of you jaani...very very much proud of you
Keep writing like this...
sorry sorry NO NO stop writing or soon you have to send flowers to my graveyard Tongue

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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 6:11pm | IP Logged
Amazing... Please cont soon and do pm me... Thnx for the previous pm..,

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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 7:59pm | IP Logged
Wow awesome and interesting update so its lavanya cant wait to read more thanks for the pm.

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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 9:24am | IP Logged
Wow... Fabulous! What a twist. I was thinking it was Anjali and it turned to be Lavanya. Nice one. Plz PM me thanks. 

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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 10:42am | IP Logged
Please update soon! This story refuses to leave my mind!

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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 11:58pm | IP Logged
First of all, if by TS you mean a Three Shot the yes I have coined that term and if you mean Two Shot then the credit goes to Krani :)


You were hiding an author in you all this while? How bad is that! I am glad that your buddies brought you out of this shell and you posted your work :)


Coming to the story, you are a very good story teller. Your story was very captivating. I didn't feel like leaving my laptop.


Sorry I didn't comment on the two parts individually, as I had an overflowing Inbox and then when I read the first part I didn't have the patience to wait for the second part :)


I though it must be Anjali all this while but it turned out to be Lavanya and the more shocking part was that Khushi was in touch with Lavanya.


I really want to know what happened between the two, why they were exactly separated.


I am hooked!

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