Arshi SS: A Mistake. Update#3-pg28 - Page 26

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Posted: 11 years ago

Wow this was amazing loved it thanks for the pm.

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Posted: 11 years ago
👏👏thanks...fantastic👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
my worst nightmare happened before my eyes when you said they're married..
oh gosh how could arnav be such a heartless jerk..
he thought that khushi slept with shyam..dint he know her enough??
damn you arnav..you dont deserve happiness...
my hearts paining over khushis grief..
and asha...shes a cute little angel..
but that pig headed idiot doesnt deserve her either...
i wonder why the 5th richest man couldn't afford an ounce of brains to realise his wifes innocence..
i feel for lavanya too..
its a mess right now..i dunno whether its the best for lavanya to  leave..
khushi wont be the same anymore..
hhmmmpphhh i hope for the best in kushis life..and lavanyas too.
update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey dear
Love the update
Omg
U describe Arnav' feelings so Beautifully
Feeling bad for him
flashback moment is treat to read
Love Arnav and Asha bond
she is really a sweetheart
Want to read more
so do try to continue soon
Thanks for the PM
Take care

Geet

Edited by sweetdesire - 11 years ago
prerna1 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi dear just read this story
liked it
its great
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
update my comment on page 28
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: TwilightStar_JP

Firstly id like to thank SHREE buddy u jus were too sweet to pm me this story!! If not for u i wud have missed sumtyn very big!! Cheers Shree! :)


ANd to the author f this amazing wonderful mind-blowing breathtaking story!! Jus Wonderful!!! How cud u pen down such a  wonderful though i guessed the Her right that she was his wife n lakash was his son n khushi n asha were out of his life!! And then when he got to knw he was betrayed by the two women of his life i jus cudnt control my tears if that was not enuf when i found him all alone on d stairs n Asha comforting him the tears that tried holdin bak jus poured out i cudn stop myself!! I m cryin lik mad even when im writin dis down!! ANd if that was not enuf the drawing n what drawings were u talkin bout sweetheart n when she drew him exactly wid such minute perfections such as bluetooth! i was speechless n d rate at which my tears poured down jus increased!! and not to forget the last paragraph!! La filed a divorce khushi is adamant nt to get bak n Lakash isn't Arnav's kid??  I m jus not able to rationally think how cud u write such wonderful meaning n exact emotions depictin work!! 
I have to applaud u for ur immense talent on that!! GO buddy!!

Cheers for the pm Shree :) mwaah!! owe u der n i have sent a buddy request to EvilMindedME 

Ps pls lemme knw ur name n buddy if u dnt mind can i suggest sumtyn?? hopin u wudnt, ur work is too precious hence try cuttin d length down n makin it more updates u knw that wud really grab eyeballs as it wud give us d hunger to want more :) :D

aww... u'r so sweet
 
but no need to thank me guyz coz it was my duty to introduce this very talented frnd of mine to u all😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Contunieee,,,,,,,,
very intresting...!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
this is a perfect update
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Posted: 11 years ago
very intresting...😃