Originally posted by: -kitti-Oh my god! I am so glad that SubhaShreeNanda sent me a PM to your story! It is so intriguing!! I want to read more!
Your writing style is very grabbing, I like that you use third person and first person for inner thoughts, and the way that you write, makes the reader feel the character's emotion. It's beautiful. I swear I had a lump in my throat reading the third chapter!I'm so glad that I gave it a chance and I can't wait for the next 'un.Update soon![P.S. a little tip: maybe you title should be ARHI TS: A Mistake. ... so that IPKKND fans can find the story. There are thousands of stories on the Fan Fictions page that it's hard to pick out the ones that don't specify which fandom they are for :) ]
Originally posted by: riafnaThank you so much Subha sree nanda for the link.Its really apreciate I was looking for this one.It was you send me the link and I read first part and second part.
Evilmindedme really I don't have to express how splendid mind blowing update was this one.You are really blessed and you really did justice to the character Arnav.The feelings the various emotions which dances in his mind, heart and his head...from the fear, then the truth which really felt him someone a knife on his heart, then the frustration, anger, the cheated by those two ladies, then the pain then the heartache, then how Asha gave him relief, then calm, his mind and heart starts to work, the clear picture what happened, then anger changes to guilt, then the love and respects again blossoms, then the reentry of ASR, the way he starts to sort out things...fabulous(May be I miss something)
Wonderful twist La was going for ask divorce she already forwarded paper for the same.I can't imagine Arshi separated, thanks for this wonderful twist.It will take time for Khushi to forgive him but just give hi a chance..
Originally posted by: kiddy-kavyaHey,
Shree PMed me this story of urs and dats hw i came to knw about it.I can't believe that i could actually miss out on a beautiful story like this.Beautuful concept, excellent twists and well done.π
well the credit goes to the writer not me so it was A's awesome jobπOriginally posted by: lolly143wow shree that was fab...
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