Arshi SS: A Mistake. Update#3-pg28 - Page 3

Wow...A new story and a new author👏👏👏...loved the way you portrayed the feelings of the characters...Awaiting your update and would you please PM when you update..Thanks to SubhaShreeNanda for forwarding your work... Edited by bhadraprasad - 11 years ago

beautiful start 👏

awesome TS.
really loved it.
loved the way you narrated and the best part of this TS is slap on the face of arnav.
superb.
no one has written that.
kushi has to bear so much and had to go through lot of pain but arnav got forgiveness easily but it seems difficult here.
so too happy.

Awesome...just continue..😊and thanks for the pm..

what departed 'em this time..??
oh gosh it was freaking fabulous..
continue asap..
and pm me when u update..please pretty please

Nice one..Can't wait to read next part..
Thanks for the pm..

Lovely work... nice twist thr...

very good TS ...I loved it😊

awee..its really awesome..love to read it..
and plz continue ...want to read more.

amazing update..👍🏼...continueee...👍🏼