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ArHi TS: Naming Her- Pt-2 *Completed* (Page 48)

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 11:34pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 12:16am | IP Logged
a heart-warming update! you've managed to get just the right blend of hesitation and passion in their interaction. the best scene by far was: He kissed the corner of her lip and stepped back, holding her dupatta out for her to take. This was his chance to check her out properly, to take in her heaving chest but instead he kept his eyes lowered to the ground. Somehow, he couldn't bring himself to do that. Not to her. shows there are boundaries he won't cross and the respect he has for her... loved that bit about him! finally the two are together and life has come full circle

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 2:13am | IP Logged

awesome update...

so cute loved it...

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 3:45am | IP Logged
Absolutely fantastic !! Loved it !!!

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 5:13am | IP Logged
Thanks for the pm...

Wow...can you write...

Absolutely love this story...felt like I was right there with them..observing, feeling, longing...

You are just GOOD!!

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 5:15am | IP Logged
awesome..it was very nice...the whole story was great...her childish ness plus his protectivenes...

awesome...so good..
you  write so well...

i am in love with your writing...

do pm me when you write anything again

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Awesome !!!! loved it

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