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Posted: 11 years ago

One of my favourite OS 😊

Beautiful😛

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emistry

@emistry

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

wow! This was an awesome story!! loved every aspect of it!

Especially the last part about her new name!! bohut ache!

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Paarijat

@Paarijat

Senior Member

Posted: 11 years ago

Hi,

I have read your OSs earlier and commented on them. Again, Brilliant writing. Are you a professional writer? If not, you have it in you to become one. It is outstanding..the ideas, the expression...great!

I usually don't like reading pieces that switch between time periods. I find such writing very irritating as a reader. Very few writers can do justice to writing that toggles between 2 time periods. You are one of them! Now, I am going to read your FF. I have also sent you a buddy request.

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rashgirl000

@rashgirl000

Goldie

Posted: 11 years ago

wow loved t.

that was sweet.

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ipkknd_gbdfan

@ipkknd_gbdfan

Senior Member

Posted: 11 years ago

So cool!

Arnav giving her her first name, and then adding on the last name. So good!!!

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urm21

@urm21

Senior Member

Posted: 11 years ago

brilliant. please sent me updates and pm, thanks

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Anjani Patel

@Titaliya_AP

IF-Rockerz

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

Will comment later :)

--edited--

Only 3 words came to me while reading this - Sweet, Sweet and Sweet! :)

I felt like in first part it was like - bachpana paas aane na de, dosti door jaane na de.

The second part made naming her a thousand times cuter. :)

Off to read your other works! :) If you have time please check out my FF :)

Edited by Titaliya_AP - 11 years ago

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LoLo

@LoLo

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Posted: 11 years ago

Edited by LoLo - 11 years ago

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Swati Hansraj

@swati-89

Goldie

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

U really have got a very vivid and beautiful imagination.

This OS seemed to right as i read it as if it could be part of someone's life somewhere in this world.

i myself am a die-hard romantic at heart and so can second my own comment now which i had left in one of ur other works that i really am a fan of ur writing now...

This was just awesome.

Thanks for writing such good stuff that put a smile on my face.

p.s my fifth comment on ur writing today or is it sixth???😉.
Edited by swati-89 - 11 years ago

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

lovely 2S... very sweet..

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