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Th#2 ArHi SS:Destroyed*AWARDED* (Page 128)

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Posted: 12 September 2012 at 4:37am | IP Logged
This was a great story !!! Thank god Khushi is saved !! I have not been able to comment or like all the parts because I read the first upd but then i hadnt added u n so was not able to keep track of the story !  Just saw yr PM for its sequal n thus got a chance to finish reading the whole thing !!!! Thank u for the Pm n once again a fantastic story !! Great job !!!

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Posted: 12 September 2012 at 5:26am | IP Logged
Sorry this took me such a long ass time, I actually commented on every single chapter individually, that's what took me so long. But then when I hit Post Reply... 

Apparently I used a word that was against the forum rules and I lost the entire thing.


After a bout of sudden depression, I decided that maybe it's for the best as all in all it ended up being about as long as several of your actual chapters :')


So allow me to summarise: this is such a fast paced story, you've kept things moving along rapidly and the surprises and the twists coming consistently. You scattered the flashbacks throughout and they always succeeded in adding something to the present timeline. 

I was terrified for Khushi from the moment you said that Arnav would destroy her completely, and the way you revealed her innocence to Arnav and the mix-up that had ruined her life interspersed with the unadulterated panic Arnav felt when he realised he was about to destroy her from the inside out was, like I said, in keeping with the incredible pace of the story. It added a sense of urgency.

When he breathed a sigh of relief, we did so too.


Though seriously, that Doctor needs to be struck off- giving a woman a hysterectomy without her permission, pffft. 

And of course, his realisation that revenge always comes back to bite you in the arse. 

Destroyed was the perfect title choice for this story, Zehra. It's the only word powerful enough to explain exactly what the two of them have done to each other.

You truly did deserve to win the award this week.

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Posted: 12 September 2012 at 5:48am | IP Logged
This was amazing!
But i'm sorry to say his apology or regret did not make me forgive him. What he was wanting to do was just disgusting and beyond the level of morality.
But let's see whether Khushi forgives him or not.
 

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Posted: 12 September 2012 at 6:27am | IP Logged
Damn! He is not hit by a truck? *Gives you a disappointed look* 
But i love you for making the doctor,the saviour.So she can conceive! YAY! But not to that bas***d's child Angry Angry Hate that bas***d! YES!
And a sequel? I should have guessed! How the hell can you finish this story in 8 parts? i should say 8 very short parts! 
Well i am all ready for the sequel only if you promise me that Arnav will be hit by a truck and die bald! Yes! Cool
Loved it Zehra! Waiting for the sequel.You know what i am expecting a very strong Khushi in the sequel! Smile

Oopsy! Just now i realized that you have updated Two chapters already for the sequel D'oh Off to read that one! 


Edited by GayuArnav - 12 September 2012 at 6:28am

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Posted: 12 September 2012 at 10:54am | IP Logged
Oops u started sequel...

Plz send me link to sequel

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Posted: 12 September 2012 at 12:02pm | IP Logged
Lovely end waitin for sequel

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Posted: 12 September 2012 at 1:55pm | IP Logged
plz plz plz send me the link for sequel.

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Posted: 12 September 2012 at 1:55pm | IP Logged
Wink

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