I must say Zee whatever I was expecting from 'Destroyed' wasn't this. I really never thought that you could write something like this, that you can make Arnav so cruel , so inhuman. Prologue was very interesting and gripping and by the first update I was like 'What the..'. But somewhere I had some hope that Arnav won't be doing anything like using Khushi physically. It may be because of the fact that you didn't write those scenes. So I had let myself hope that may be Arnav stripped her daily but then pushed her away to make her feel that she wasn't good enough or much beautiful to gain his interest. (this was majorly influenced by Making Decisions) But my hopes were crushed brutally. Oh how could Arnav do it. Even if she was dating Shyam behaving with her the way Arnav did it would have defined only Arnav's character and not hers. So it would have been simpler if he had just kept her in his custody. It's him who has destroyed a simple, fun loving girl. Now I am moving to Unconditional for some unconditional love. I hope it's there because day has to come after every dark night. PS: Thanks for reposting it.
lazy i have to give a plus π for this true, humiliating, n heartless story yar it is in all sense an hatred dark story i have ever red till now, n u r ultimate in what ever u write... (a true talented writer), keep up d good work.
Oh my GOD Di thiss Ss left me crying dammit π How can Arnav do this to innocent Girl Dammit wish i can Slap him Idiot Kahi kaaπ‘ I am so loving this ss Di Hatts Off Yaar ..i was acrually bitting my nails while reading Ss :D amazing yarπ
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