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~FLAMES OF LOVE~MG(PART3-PG13)

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HEY BUDDIES, ITS ISHA HERE, WITH MY NEW STORY, HOPE YOU WILL LIKE IT, DO TELL ME YOUR VIEWS, THANKS TO ALL MY READERS, LOVE YOU ALL, Big smileBig smileEmbarrassed







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INTRODUCTION




"You said you loved me, i   smiled,

  You said i am your life, i smiled,

   You said that we are not made for each other,  i smiled,

   You said its all over, i smiled,

   You said its time to move on, i  smiled,

   You said its time to say bye, i smiled,

  AND  You left me, but i am stil there,hoping that you          will return to me"

I am geet handa,  and this is my story, it is rightly said that every love story doesn't have an happy ending, like mine. My life and soul left me saying that may be we are not made for each other, i smiled and left. Today he is going to be someone else's , but i am still  standing on the place where we first  meet, hoping that he will return to me. i am standing on the edge of hill, waiting for him to come to me, waiting for a miracle to happen , waiting for you to realize your mistake and run to me and crushed me in your arm and ask for forgiveness  like always. but is that possible, i don't know, but i can promise you that i will never show my face to you, if you didn't come. But i can live without seeing my reflection in your eyes nor  can show you my face, so i have decided to end it. its night time, you may be married, and living a happy life, i always wanted to say "i love you now also and wish for your happiness, its time to leave, hope you never remember about me" and i moved towards my end, i smiled and said "it's time to be free, bye my life" and i gave myself to lap of nature and close my eyes after that... i said " I love you maan and will always  wait for you..." and closed my eyes with glow in my face...

...

how is it??

please please tell me...

me eagArly waiting for your reply...

I KNOW I HAVE SO MANY FF, BUT PROMISE THIS IS LAST ONE, NO NEW ONE, TILL ALL ARE  COMPLETED...





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Edited by ishanidhi08 - 01 October 2012 at 11:52am

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INTRODUCTION-PG1
PART1-PG3
PART2-PG8

PART3-PG13





Edited by ishanidhi08 - 01 October 2012 at 11:51am

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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 12:03am | IP Logged
FOR PM, PLEASE ADD ME IN YOUR BUDDY LIST...
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HOPE YOU WILL LIKE IT..
DO COMMENT AND GIVE YOUR VIEWS, WAITING FOR YOUR REPLIE
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Edited by ishanidhi08 - 05 September 2012 at 12:03am

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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 12:06am | IP Logged
ye kya maan left geet poor geet



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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 12:11am | IP Logged
interesting start

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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 12:15am | IP Logged
awesome start hope maan married na ho aur time pe aa k geet ko bacha le

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gud start..
congrats dear..

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nice concept...
continue soon...

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