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St. Louis teachers try to reunite kriyansh... OS

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Posted: 04 September 2012 at 1:44pm | IP Logged
hey peeps...

Today is TEACHERS DAY

and I'm here with my os..teacher's day special os

St. Louis TEACHERS try to reunite KRIYANSH

I dont knw

It will be good or bad...yesterday I was in accounts cls...and my frnds discuss abt teachers day...(back bench par the toh teacher ne gossip karte nhi pakda)...so idea came in my mind and In recess when I get tym I pen it down
ok guyz bear me

like always...

kriti <3


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Edited by Kriti_rox - 05 September 2012 at 5:59am

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Karan Sir, RDX sir and Nicole Mam again join St. Louis...and now karan sir is permanent student concealer...and accounts teacher...
When Karan asked about Kriya and their gown up relation of kriyansh he get to know that kriya ditched him...
he could not believed his ears hat he hear is right...kriya ditch rey hows on earth is possible...
ya she always said that rey is her friend...just good friend...
but her eyes clearly shows that shes madly and deeply in love with him...

Staff room
karan is thinking about the things gang told him about kriya how kriya ditched rey..and all...
and then nicole and rdx enters...they saw karan lost in his thoughts...they go near him and

RDX :karan kya hua...tum kaha khoye hue ho...(and with rdx voice he came back to his senses)

Karan :huh..kya hua..?

RDX :wahi main pooch raha hooh kya hua...kaha khoye hue ho...

Karan :ravi main soch raha tha jo sabne kaha wo sach hai...kya kriya shi main rey ko ditch kar sakti hai...

Nicole :hum bhi usi baat ko lekar pareshaan hai...kriya aisa  kaise kar  sakti hai..uski aankhon main harkaton main maine rey k liye pyaar dekha hai...kaise wo mujhe aur rey ko saath dance karta dekh J hui thi...usse saaf pata chalta hai...kriya rey se pyaar karti thi...

Karan  :karti thi nhi karti hai...kriya rey ko kabhi nhi bhul sakti...

RDX :par rey jaroor kriya ko bhul gya hai

Karan  :nhi rdx rey ne bhale hi nyi gf banayi ho par rey kriya ko nhi bhula...ha wo dikhata hai ab kriya uski lyf main matter nhi karti par aisa nhi hai...wo khud se hi bhaag rha hai...

Nicole :ha ravi rey ki eyes main shine nhi hai jo kriya k hote hue hoti thi...na hi taani ko dekh kar uska face glow karta hai...

RDX :jaise kriya ko dekh k karta tha...ya right...rey kriya se pyaar karta hai...ye toh humne jaan lia...par kriya bhi rey k liye kuch feel karti thi ya karti hai...ye kaise jaanenge...

Karan :ye jaanne ki zaroorat nhi hai...main jaanta hoon kriya rey se pyaar karti thi..karti hai...aur karti rahegi...par hume ye jaana hai aisa kya hua tha...jo kriya ne ye decision liya...kriya ne kaha kriya ko rey k naam se fame chaiye tha..par real main toh kriya aur rey k baare main kisi ko pata hi nhi tha..use jo fame mila uske dance se mila...kuch toh baat hai...jo kriya ko ye karne k liye mazboor kiya hai...wo baat hume jaani hogi aur fir hum kriya aur rey ko saath la sakte hai...

R&N : par ye hum karenge kaise...

Karan :are yaar sab main sochumga ya tum bhi kuch sochoge...chalo socho socho...chodo main hi kuch sochta hoon...

Karan :hmm rdx kriya mumbai aane se pehle dehradun rehti thi...

RDX :haa...

Karan : toh uske ghar ka kuch address hoga...

RDX :hmm ha kriya k addmission form main hoga...

Karan :abhi mil sakta hai...

RDX :dhundna padega par mil toh jayega...

(after lot of searching they found kriya's dehradun's home address...)

RDX :karan tum kya karne ki soch rahe ho...

Karan :hmm kuch jyada nhi bas...kriya aur reyansh ko  dobara kryiansh banane ka try kar raha hoon...aur ismain tum dono mera saath doga...done...

R&N :done...

Next day karan leave  for dehradun...

he reached dehradun...and also found kriya's home...

2-3 days he observed her...and he found she's not kriya...yes she's not the same kriya he knows...she like a body without soul...she living only for her mom sake...

4 day ...
kriya's home
someone press the door bell and kriya open the door...and shocked to saw him here...at her house...then she looked his right and left side and found nicole mam and RDX sir standing beside him...

Kriya :karan sir...nicole mam Rdx sor...aaap log yahan...

trio :hii kriya...andar nhi bulaogi...

Kriya :oh sorry plz come in...(then they all sat in the living area)

Rdx :kriya aapki mom...

Kriya :mom nanu k ghar hai...unki thodi tabyat kharab hai...main aap k liye kuch khane k liye laati hoon...(kriya reurns with some snacks and coldrinks and then she her self settle down beside karan sir)

Kriya :waise aap sab yahan aise...

Karan :kyo kriya acha nhi laga hume dekhke...

Kriya :nhi sir bohot acha laga...(and then she look towards nicole...and found her in sarree choda vermillion and mangalsutra)...wow nicole mam aapki shaddi hogyi...kisse...(then she look towrds rdx and blushed)...wow congrats sir mam...

Karan :hmm kriya...yahan hum tumse baat karne aaye hai...

Kriya :kya sir...?

karan look towards nicole and rdx and they nodded...

Karan :kriya maine st. louis join kiya aur waha sab se pata chala ki tumne rey ko ditch kiya...main jaanta hoon ye sach nhi hai...aur main yahan sach jaanne k liye aaya hoon...

kriya :nhi sir yahi sach hai...maine rey ko ditch kiya...

Karan :kriya apni jhooti kahaniyon se tum rey ko jhoot bol sakti hon..mujhe nhi main jaanta hoon tum aisa kar hi nhi sakti batao kriya kya sach hai...plz batao...

now kriya can't control herself..and beak down in karans embrace she crying bitterly...and karan sooth her like a big brother...after some tym she control herself...and narrate the full story to them...

tears came in trios eyes after hearing the truth...and trio thinking...kriya's is so selfless...she did so much for her dosti...and now she deserve her dil and dance...

Karan :kriya main tumhari mom se baat karta hoon...wo jaroor maan jayegi...

Kriya :nhi sir mom nhi maanegi...aur plz aap unse kuch baat mat kariyega...karan nodded but in mind 

Karan :(in mind)sry kriya main tumhari ye baat nhi maan sakta...main tum dono ko khush dekhna chata hoon...aur main jaanta hoon...tum dono ki khusi sirf ek saath hone se hai...aaur main tum dono ko mila kar rahungu...

Karan :hmm kriya ek glass paani milega...(kriya nodded and goes in kitchen for water..but left her cellphone there...)(karan take her cell phone..and note down kriya's mom num..and before she came...he keep the cell on its place...)

Nicole :hmm ab hume chalna chaiye...(all nodded..and they all leave from there)

outside kriya's house..karan discuss his next plan with nicole and rdx...and call smriti...and they tell her to meet them in near by cafe...

cafe...
trio is waiting for smriti..and after sometym she arrives...and hey start their mission manao smriti...first smriti is not in mood of hearing about shirtless wonder...but they convince him...rey is not like tahat what she thinks...and after lot of manaofying...she agrees for rey and kriya's relationship and dance...for kriya's happiness...coz she always wants her happiness...and she alsi noticed..kriya  after coming from mumbai...

1 mission - real truth - checked
2 mission - mano RLB - checked
3 mission - kriyansh - pending

now the third mission start...

now trio in mumbai...
St. Louis
there first work is to make rey realize that he still love kriya...and its a easy job for them...they alsways take name of kriya in each work...that make rey frustrated...coz he always lost him in their memories...and with that he realized...he still love kriya...but reality hit him...she hates him...nad he endup in crying...and then karan enters the FE...and console him...

Karan :rey main jaanta hoon tum kyo ro rhe hon...magar ek baat puchni main mujhe tumse...kya tumhe sach main lagta hai ki kriya tumhe ditch kar sakti hai...

Rey :lagta toh nhi hai sir...par sach toh yahi hai na...

Karan :sach...sach kya hai tumne jaanne ki koshish ki...tumhare dil ne kaise maan liya ki kriya tumse pyaar nhi karti...

Rey :dil toh abhi bhi yahi kehta hai...kriya mujhse pyaar karti hai...

Karan :toh apne dil ki baat suno...aur jao kriya k paas pucho...kyo kiya usne aisa...

Rey :yes sir..main jaunga kriya k paas...puchunga use kyu kiya usne mere saath aisa kyo chod k gyi mujhe...ar jab tak wo mujhe jawab nhi deti...main mumbai wapas nhi aaunga...

karan :ye hui na baat...

Rey :but sir ek prob hai...

Karan :wo kya...?

Rey :kriya ki mom..RLB...wo toh mujhe bilkul pasand nhi karti...wo toh meri shakal bhi nhi dekhna chahengi...

Karan :dont worry wo maan jayegi...

Rey :r u sure...

Karan :damn sure...

(ok Im cutting how rey & karan reacch in dehradun...hmm hum direct aate hai...kriya k house...)

Kriya house...

rey press the door bell..and kriya open the door...rey is shocked to see kriya like this...no glow on her face...dark circles around her ees...

kriya open the door and found rey...she is shocked to him here...

Kriya :rey...(rey came back to senses)

Rey :mujhe tumse baat karni...

Kriya :hmm boliye...

Rey :sach kya hai kriya...

Kriya :sach kaisa sach..aap kis sach ki baat kar rhe hai...mujhe kuch nhi pata...

Rey :bholi mat bano kriya...main wo sach jaanna chata hoon...jo tumne mujhse chupya...wo sach jisne majboor kiya tumhe mujhse dur jaane k liye...batao kriya kya hai sach...(and then she broke down in rey arms...and narrates him all story...)

Kriya :rey aap plz yahan se chale jaiye..maanlijiye aap ki lyf main koi kriya thi hi nhi...

Rey :kaise maan loon kriya...kriya main tumhari mom se baat karta hoon wo maan jayengi...

Kriya :nhi rey wo nhi maanegi...aap plz yahan se jaiye...agar aap sach main mujhse pyar karte hai na...toh plz chale jaiye...aur kabhi wapas mat aayega...aapko meri kasam...(and then she shut the door on his face)

kriya totally broke down and sit on the floor...and crying...

and other side rey's is also crying...

smriti..came to kriya and console her...she listen everything...

Smriti :kriya 
(kriya stand and wipes her tears)

Smriti :kriya usse acha ladka tumhe nhi milega...rok lo use...jao kriya...jao apne pyaar k paas...

(kriya is so happy after hearing her mother words...she goes to her mother and hug her and then she open the door but rey is no where to seen..then she look towards the car..there is he...he starts the car..and drive off...kriya run towards the car...but car is fastly drove off..the she takes the auto...and follow his car...and tthen his car stop near the suicide point...and he's standing on the edge...one more step and he will fall down...kriya rum towards him...she's so scared to saw him there...she reach towards him...turns him...and hugs him tightly...

kriya :I love u rey...I love u...mom maaan gyi rey...ab hume koi alag nhi kar sakta,,,,,

Rey :sach 

Kriya :nodded...

Rey :wow kriya I'm soo happy...and he hugs her...I LOVE U KRIYA>>>>

Kriya :I love u too rey...(and then she hears some wooo hooo..and whistlings...)

(and then they turn around they found his friends..with rdx sir,nicole mam..and karan...and RLB)

they look towards their teacher...

K & R :THANK U SIR THANK U MAM...Happy Teachers day...

***the end*** sorry ***the beginning***

pheww finished
thak gyi yaar main

guyz one request...plz har baat ka logic mat nikalna...

maine logically nhi likha...

ok plz guyz...give me ur likes and cmnts...

I'm waiting

kriti








Edited by Kriti_rox - 05 September 2012 at 8:16am

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