Th#2ArHi FF:Late Ch.7to10*Re-posted pg.146* - Page 22

Aww She forgave him & the punishment is too gud!
Awesome update Zehra, loved it!

mast update dhinchale 😉

but  For a moment i thought they were going to kiss😳😳😳

but koi baat nahi next time 😛

thnx for pm

So cute and sweet.

Srry for cmenting late for the 6^th part' sry srry srry..i hopre u hve forgiven me..plseee

 

PART 6 

"Are you suar?"

🤣

Omg that was hilarious..i cant control my self

After all the laughing gas ka effect hain 😉

"Kyu aap Barun Sobti hai jo mein aapko dekhu?"

"He is the hottest guy on earth"

🤣

Yup may b ' luv this dialogue'dotd amzing luv the way u write ..

"It is actually my bootiphul face that makes these sarees bootiphul as well" Manorama laughed a laugh which would have scared anyone.🤣🤣

Perfect luved it'

🤣🤣 

The dilaouges r perfect for each of the character

It seems like im watching a real show or sumthing like that

I can very well imagine each nd every scene in ur ss

Ur an amzing writer zehra di

 

 

 

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😳 Edited by HARSHU246 - 11 years ago

PART 7

Aww THAT WAS SOOO CUTE   I really loved this part…

nd specially the last part…

that was hilarious

the way khushi handed him the book

. bechara arnav to phas gaya..lol

I luved  it

Really luved it

Muah hugs 2 ya

Ur an amzing writer

Nd I luv u for this

I just luv this ss,..one of my fav!!!!!

Hugs

Continue soon zehra di !! 😛

A beautiful beginning of friendship n attraction😛  pls update soon😉

Eeks!! i have my name in the dedications!!
love u sweetheart!!
the update was great...i just wish they had started making out!! i know- my mind is always in the gutter😆

🤣 LOVED THIS ONE khushi cracked me up LOL this girl is amazing :P

aw such a sweet sweet update!