SS:Dheeme Dheeme Yeh Dil Chap 5 Page 27 - Page 4

Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by afreshbegin


Well concept is superb...

Par UV ke bachhe ki ma banna compromise nahi pleasant surprise hona chahiye rite?😉

Thanx for the PM dear

N pls continue this story
 
 
Thanx Dear

Apka hukum sarakhon par...

Welcum 4 pm

After posting my next chap of waiting for you
I will surely update.
Posted: 11 years ago
interesting concept...manayate gets pregnant huh..lol..
do add me to your pm list plzzz
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by hemvb


interesting concept...manayate gets pregnant huh..lol..
do add me to your pm list plzzz

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Thanx Dear
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by san.gar



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Shadi ke bad bhi nahi , pregnant hone ke bad Sweta...
achha that means bachche maa-baap ko jodte hai types scene hone wala hai...par kuch bhi kaho mujhe naa manyata ki pregnancy aur manveer ke bachcho wale scenes kuch jyada hi achhe lagte hai...sooo...dear update soon...
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by swetsurati


achha that means bachche maa-baap ko jodte hai types scene hone wala hai...par kuch bhi kaho mujhe naa manyata ki pregnancy aur manveer ke bachcho wale scenes kuch jyada hi achhe lagte hai...sooo...dear update soon...

OK Sweta
Posted: 11 years ago
really nice concept plzz continue writing 
Posted: 11 years ago
                          


Manyata is sitting quiet in the room.  She is remmbring today's meeting with Maharana Prithvi

The Meeting

Maharana Prithvi: Yuvrani Manyata aap acche se janti hai  ki agar apne Deogarh ka naya varis nahi mila toh Devgarh estate trust me chala jayega.

Aur ye Deogarh ko last warning hai

M: Magar Maharana Prithvi Devgarh ko abhi ek bhi warning nahi mili hai  jo hume wo last warning de rahe hai.

Who log acche se jante hai Dadi Sa ne is des ke liye kitna kuch kiya hai.

Maharana P: Beta Devgarh ko kai sari warnings pehle hi mil chuki hai jab aap Yuvrani ban ne ki mana kar rahi thi,Khair aap chodiye ye humara farz tha apko batana tha ab ye aap par depend karta hai aap mane ya na mane.

End

Manyata  is so worried about her estate.Finally she decided to talk to her grandmother.

M: Khama Ghadi Dadi Sa

DS: Ghadi Ghamma Manyata Beta

Kaisi hai aap aur Uday kaise hai

M: Hum acche hai aur Uday bhi acch hai

Dadi Saa hum apse bat karna chahte

(She tell everything to DS)

DS: Beta hum isme apki koi madad nahi kar sakte kyonki Devgarh ko pehle hi kafi sare Ultimatum mil chuke hai  aur is bar Devgarh  khatre me hai aur bas aap hi use bacha sakti hai.

Beta Plez Devgadh ko bacha lijiye.

M: Dadi Saa aap chinta mat kijiye…sab thik ho jayega.

Her last hope is also in dump.

Manyata decided to talk Uday.

M: Hello Uday kitni der me aa rahe ho

UV: Bas 5 min me.

Kyo kuch bat karni thi Manyata

M: Haan tum ghar aa jao phir bat karte hai

U:Aa gaye ghar, Ab batao

M: Kahan

U: Tumhare piche

Manyata turns to see Uday and he is standing on the door.

U: Kya bat hai Manyata phone par kafi pareshan lag rahi thi kya hua

Manyata tell everything to Uday

U: Ab Kya

M: I need a baby.

U: Are you sure

M : 100%

U: Thike hum kal hi Doctor se bat karte hai aur wo fir in-vitro fertilization se tumhe pregnant kar denge.

M: Uday mujhe baccha natural process  se chahiye.

U: What

Are you in your mind

Don't tell me ki tumhe ye nahi pata ki natural process se bacche kaise hote hain.

M: Shut Up Uday main koi doodh peeti bacchi nahin hu

Main to bas isliye keh rahi thi kyonki tum jante ho IBF me kitne risk hote hai aur jab hum dono healthy hai to kya problem hai

Uday aaj nahi to kal hume baccha chahiye tha na.

U: Thike Manyata magar pehle dinner humhe bahut tez bhook lagi hai..

M: Ok

They both take a dinner and headed to room.

M: Uday tum fresh ho jao hum tab tak ready ho jate hai

Uday headed to washroom and after several minutes he comes out in towel.

The room is completely dark and Uday is not able to see anything. A piece of cloth comes in his foot and it is just like saree.

UV: Manyata kaha ho tum

M: Uday hum blanket ke andar hai.

 Uday slowly slowly headed towards bed and then his knee hit a bed.

Manyata realizes Uday is near her.

M: Uday apna hath aage badao .

U: Kyo badao

M: Badao Please

Uday move his hand Manyata locked them with handcuff.

U: What the

Ye kya kar rahi ho Manyata

M: Hathkadi  laga rahe hai jis se tum hume idhar udhar choo na sako.

Manyata tell Uday to lay over her and Uday do as told by Manyata .

It is an hour passed but Uday didn't enter Manyata .

M: Uday why are you not entering, ek ghanta ho gaya magar …

Uday tum to in sab me expert ho phir bhi

UV: Manyata humne jab bhi ye sab kiya hai to kabhi humare hath me hathkadi nahi thi.

Humare hath kholdo , I swear ek minute bhi nahi lagega

M:Jis se tum hume idhar –udhar chuyo

U: to light jala do

M: Jis se tum hume bina kapdo ke dekho.

U: Choone nahi de sakti magar baccha paida kar sakti ho

M: Haan kar sakte hai apne estate ko bachane ke naate kuch bhi nahi kar sakte hai

U: Seriously humne tumhare jaisi ladki kabhi nahi dekhi.

M: Ju aaah ah aaawh

Uday realizes that he entered in Manyata . Manyata has no feeling during this but she is enjoying this too much and want that it never ends.But everything has its end. Soon they do a climax but can't seprate.

U: Manyata tumhari vajah se hum ab hil bhi nahi pa rahe

M: To aise hi so  jayo

UV: Kya

M: Jyada sawal mat karo ab jo hoga subah dekhenge

Uday and Manyata both are sleepy, so they fall asleep on each other.

Its Morning time and rays of sun fall on Manyata's face.

Manyata is first to wake up. She wakes Uday too

After realizing their position both get separated with too much difficulty.

UV: Manyata ab toh humari hathkadiyan khol do

Manyata open the lock of his handcuffs but she is not able to move.

M: Uday hum me bilkul himmat nahi hai

Pregnant hona itna easy nahi hai…

Then a knock on the door and a voice Dada Bhabhi Sa 10:00 baj gaye hai uth jaiye aur haan Dada Dad apko bula rahe hai….

UV: Choti tum chalo hum atey hai

Hum me bilkul power nahi bachi hai

Un: Kya

UV: Kuch nahi Choti tum chalo

Manyata utho breakfast karna hai

M: Uday hum me bilkul power nahi hai

Hum uth bhi nahi sakte

U: Manyata aaj DS bhi aane wali hai uth jao aur hum to chale jayenge aur tumhe aisi halat me dekh ke kya sochengi.

Precap: All come to meet Manyata .

Manyata has no power left and she is so much weak and can't able to stand properly.

End of Chapter

Guys ! Like if u like it and Plez share your views.

If u thought that it is bad , I stopped to write and will not disappoint you more…

Sanya 

Posted: 11 years ago
great start...marvellous...at da same time funny... 😆 👏 ...how did u get that handcuffs idea...so funny...my god... simply superb 👏
Posted: 11 years ago
awesome the handcuff idea was really nice and manyata was so funny this is the most funniest and weirdest love making i have ever read great job sanya👏
Posted: 11 years ago
HI Dear;
Very nice start.
Manyata getting pregnant...seems like a very pain -staking task...
I really can't tell ; who I feel more sorry for(M or U)
Very eager about the next part.
Update soon...

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