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mysticmanthri Senior Member
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Joined: 18 February 2012
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Posted: 04 September 2012 at 12:10pm | IP Logged
bless you...
u r so wonderful to write a simple idea of a hubby returning home for his wife becoz she is scared into such a sweet story ...
thou idea is a bit filmy the way u write always tugs somewhere deep..wonderful...this what makes u essentially u ...u just connect with ur readers with such a tender treatment to story telling...
to cut story to short loved the os as always...

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duncanelise Senior Member
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Posts: 385

Posted: 04 September 2012 at 12:29pm | IP Logged
That was so wonderful!
I'm really running out of words to use when I comment in your writing... Everything is just so... Perfectly described!
I loved the part when she reassured him that she hadn't felt scared on their wedding night.
Absolutely beautiful!

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farheen75 IF-Rockerz
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Posts: 6613

Posted: 04 September 2012 at 1:15pm | IP Logged
Loved it.

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newmoon2011 IF-Rockerz
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Joined: 02 August 2011
Posts: 6568

Posted: 04 September 2012 at 2:36pm | IP Logged
Awesome os
Loved it!

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inspiringstars Goldie
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Joined: 27 January 2012
Posts: 2167

Posted: 04 September 2012 at 2:37pm | IP Logged
Awww I feel for her. Poor girl, missing her husband, and I understand how it feels.

Thanks for the PM.

It was beautiful!

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summaiyasayed IF-Sizzlerz
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Joined: 10 February 2012
Posts: 15449

Posted: 04 September 2012 at 2:38pm | IP Logged
so sweet updt

thanks for pm

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snoopy84 IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 04 September 2012 at 3:00pm | IP Logged
awww that was real beautiful the ending was real cute

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Gargee Senior Member
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Joined: 26 May 2009
Posts: 700

Posted: 04 September 2012 at 3:02pm | IP Logged
B!!! Lookie here!! Me reads, Me comments now! Big smile

Wowiiiee!! What a beautiful Concept (as usual Hmph!)!! B, seriously. You're gonna have to answer my man for the great expectations I'm gonna have from him! Because he'll have to be sweet Just like Your Arnav here is... Or Maybee, I'll just take this one home with me. Yeah? Big smile

Awww!! He came back from Turkey, to take her with him! And the description about his loneliness- and the reason behind his success as a Business man, his obsession with work- only defeated by the obsession he has with his WifeWink, and her need for him- her shame to ask anyone else to be with her for the duration that he isn't there, her hesitation to ask him, teel him what's troubling her, and the way she understands his silence... *sigh* Perrrfect! True Soul Mates! *Dreamy sigh*

Amazing. Gorgeous. Beautiful. 

As Always! (Hmph! Hmph, I say!)LOL

Loads of Love Hon! 
G <3

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