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Posted: 16 October 2012 at 8:57am | IP Logged
Thnx nidhi di fr updatin dis.. Ws waitin fr it lyk hell. Used to visit dis thread daily hopin dat u updated. Nd alas u did.:-D:-D now cumin to d update..
Angelic.. dats wt i felt after readin d update.. Swayam's anguish.. Pain.. Irrevocable Love... All wre ptryd so beautifully.. Nd sharon's guilt nd pain... Dey wre jst superb.. I cud totally feel sharon.. Dat ws d impact of ur awesome writin...Sharon communicatin wit her baby.. It ws vry touchy.. U r a Super talented writer. I ws so much waitin fr dis update dat read it repeatedly... I Hope u wl update soon dis tym... Waitin fr it eagerly... Once again... A fantastic update.

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Ananya.SwaRon Goldie
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Joined: 17 June 2012
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Posted: 16 October 2012 at 9:25am | IP Logged
thank god,you remember this,i thought you totally forgot about it. but thank god, you didn't.
coming to the update,it was Brilliant once again. the emotions which you tend to bring about in your works are realsome. the way you pen down the up-risings and the downfalls which cause SwaRon is wonderful.you picked the Oh-so-perfect SwaRon moments.the part which caught my attention for the most was where the scribbled handwriting part came. awww..! Swayam is not like the other boys, he isn't the one who would take up vengeance but would rest with Peace. and now talking about Sharon,the way you are playing with Sharon's character is commendable, the former pain and the current guilt are nicely put forward. 
and now for the last,but absolutely not the least, the little convos which Sharon haves with their baby are liking an icing on the top. and i vouch for what Sharon said, a Shikhawat is the one who could conquer the mightiest in the world be it the Raiprakash itself. so baby, inherit your father's trait.

P.S: though you mentioned it in the foot-note that the next update would take long yet try and make it soon,real soon.
P.P.S:i wish i could read much of Sharon talking to their to-be-born Shikhawat.

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Posted: 16 October 2012 at 9:51am | IP Logged
dis is sooo damn touching.. felt d same pain while reading..!!
update soon..!!

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Joined: 08 May 2012
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Posted: 16 October 2012 at 11:09am | IP Logged
awsum!! 
lyked it!! 

waitin for more

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Posted: 16 October 2012 at 12:31pm | IP Logged
Loved it totally nidhi...as always very well penned...
i jus love the flow of this SS...update soon please...
thanks for the pm..

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Posted: 17 October 2012 at 9:54pm | IP Logged
first of all i didn't knew that u have started writing a diary  of Swaron.i read d second part now..it was beautifully written..i liked it..nd d last part of her talkng to d baby was also nice.now i'll go and read d first part..
first part-
the starting was nice.i liked d way u explained her state of mind as she is pregnant.and i had always in my mind to see d rdx party wala story frm sharon's pov.but neverthless felt nice to read it frm swayam's pov.now waiting fr d next part.do update soon.


Edited by chimpukli10 - 17 October 2012 at 10:03pm

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Posted: 18 October 2012 at 8:38pm | IP Logged
What an update...it really left me speechless...bought all the old memories back...culd very well visualize sharon...u r such an awesome writer...hatts off...plz continue soon.

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gunnu1 Goldie
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Posted: 19 October 2012 at 7:14am | IP Logged
loved it...!! 
The pain she's going thru...
Thw way Swayam's diary is written...
u're choice of words is great...!! loveeed it totally...!! 

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