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A OneShot a Day: A SwaRon Collection (Page 32)

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 2:07pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Rutu

Thanks for in-detail description and for discreteness LOL
Me satisfied nowEvil Smile

My pleasure. LOL

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 2:15pm | IP Logged
This one was just breezy. Like a rom com movie before intermission. ( Well all the love and complication happen in second part LOL ). It was such a fun to read. And I'm sure each person who has lived or is living in a hostel or a lodging facility would miss those days. Geek.

This one was just superbly written and believe me it didnot felt rushed. On the contrary it felt like this OS should never end and it should go on. All the incidents you mentioned funny and entertaining in their own way. And as I have already told you 'her eyes blinked with such fierce hostility that the Russian nationalists would have been proud of her.' This line was just epic. Breakkfast portion was the most relatable incident. And bathroom and bedroom incident have me in LOL mode. Swayam's as well as Sharon's character were really itched in an intriguing manner in this OS. I would love to read more about them again :)

It was an awesome fun and nice break from the crap which the Cv's are showing us these days through these OS's. And I'm pretty sure evn though this marathon has finished but still I will haunt this thread.

And yeah next time start a full fledged Olympic not just marathon.

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 2:32pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by marauder

This one was just breezy. Like a rom com movie before intermission. Is that a compliment, Marauder boy? Stern Smile( Well all the love and complication happen in second part LOL ). It was such a fun to read. And I'm sure each person who has lived or is living in a hostel or a lodging facility would miss those days. Geek. Sadly, I never got the chance. Disapprove

This one was just superbly written and believe me it didnot felt rushed. I really did feel as though I went through it a little bit faster than normal. Stern Smile On the contrary it felt like this OS should never end and it should go on. Wouldn't you like that? Evil SmileAll the incidents you mentioned funny and entertaining in their own way. And as I have already told you 'her eyes blinked with such fierce hostility that the Russian nationalists would have been proud of her.' This line was just epic. And like I've told you, I have started paying a lot of attention in the History class by sincerely reading Kane and Abel during the lecture. Evil SmileBreakkfast portion was the most relatable incident. Kyu reh Shishir? Ab tak kitne logon ka breakfast chura kai khaya hai?LOLAnd bathroom and bedroom incident have me in LOL mode. Swayam's as well as Sharon's character were really itched in an intriguing manner in this OS. I would love to read more about them again :)

It was an awesome fun and nice break from the crap which the Cv's are showing us these days through these OS's. And I'm pretty sure evn though this marathon has finished but still I will haunt this thread. Hee. Big smile

And yeah next time start a full fledged Olympic not just marathon. Tu toh mera case leh kar hi rahega! Stern Smile

Thanks a ton Shishir. You know, I believe our sense of humour is on the same wavelength. LOL

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 3:29pm | IP Logged

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 4:59pm | IP Logged
Nidhi you never fail to amaze me with your amazing writing skills and now with the themes of your OS's. 

Foreplay : Love what you mentioned about how SwaRon love keeping the sceret about dere relationship. All i can say is very beautifully written. I love how Sharon acts as if she controls everything and how Swayam is capable to turn tables with one move and she is lost in him. Blushing

If You Could See Me Now : Beautiful and this one fr sure left me speechless. Swayam and his reaction for the stalker lady was funny. Sharon as a blind girl..love the way you described Sharon's character...and love how u made Swayam describe Sharon's beauty and his eagerness to see her eyes. The way Sharon is living even though she is blind is so inspiring. Loved SwaRon conversation and loved the way you described swayam's shock of state knowing about Sharon. Loved the part where Sharon asked if she can touch his face to remember him...very beautifully penned down. Smile

Roommates : Well this one was indeed a sweet and funny one. Love the way you sketched Swayam and Sharon's characters. Ouch feel sorry for Swayam ass 4 consecutive kicks from Sharon LOL  The bathroom part was damn funny specially "I like to move it" part  ROFL

Sharon's reaction when Swayam shamelessly ate her cheese parantha and said that it was the tastiest parantha ever was hilarious poor girl could not stop thinking about same. It was sweet of him to buy her a gift. Loved the end when Sharon and Swayam both mumbled I'm going to kill you in the morning and can't wait. Big smile

Thank you Nidhi for giving us such amazing OS's and sad since you said this is the last one. Thanz once again for PM Smile

P.S Sorry was unable to comment regularly. 


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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 8:57pm | IP Logged

sooo cute + sweet both of

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 10:42pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sawyer_Tom

Originally posted by meevee

I'm glad I came back to check Nidz...luved this one for the simplicity it echoed...I had a feeling of watching a wellscripted telefilm Well that's a new compliment. LOL...I culd imagine our fav characters enacting the whole part in front of me...all the interactions between them had a natural feel to it...like Gargi pointed out, u brought out the camaraderie between them so effectively, there was an unstated ease in each other's presence and a sense of trust too that the line wuldnt b crossed I love you Meera! You get me!Shocked Hug...the gesture of him buying a gift for her to celebrate their year-long acquaintance after an indifferent start and resting at a mutually warming companionship was adorable...the paratha sequence was described with ur exceptional touch and I really enjoyed the way u ended the OS ... iBlush like a tomato. Blushing

Ur mind is so truely a treasureWink of ideas and ur so naturally made for writing that even if u wish u cant stay away from it for long...so I hav no worries on that part... Naturally made for writing? Well that's flattering. Embarrassed         

Thank you so much Meera. You always seem to get the essence of my writing. It's an honour to read a comment from you, really. Basically I just love you. Hug
 
The luv is mutual to the extreme NidhiSmile and it is a pleasure even to look forward to your work...

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