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A OneShot a Day: A SwaRon Collection (Page 31)

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 1:21pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Rutu

Read three chapters in one go and to begin with commenting on each of them lemme tell you all of them were distinctively apart from each other!!
ForeplayShocked 
The title left me flabbergasted. That was the intention. LOLBut as I read, it was different and you made it a point to present it in a most aesthetic way. I loved the portion where you gave their take so as to how they enjoyed keeping their relationship under wraps. I had to add a little SwaRon essence in it, didn't I? Stern Smile
And loved the boys girls reaction. The former being shameless and the later scandalized.LOL  How I would love to see that in the show! Ouch

The second last oneApprove
Well the best of all. I loved it the most.You had me in the title itselfApprove .The stalker woman scared me too. Yeah, stalkers aren't as interesting as certain people seem to think. Stern SmileThe motion sickness, ah could unsderstand Swayam's state there.The resemblance is uncanny (me too,suffer the sameStern Smile) Me three. It was actually written from a personal experience. The nauseous feeling, not the story.  I absolutely loved Sharon's character here. With her feeling his face to remember him.You had me there too!!!

The last oneBig smile
I had a smile on my face upon the reading the title itself.
Sharon's teeny scornful behaviour and the change in her gradually was commendable. Swayam being the irritated roomie with his outlandish behaviour one can ask for and the same time acknowledging her by gifting her the bracelet on their anniversary. The best bit had to be the last one where he once again slipped into her bed and slept besides her. But with his shirt removed, I wonder why?LOL Don't get ideas, woman! It's humid in Mumbai! LOL


Thanks a ton for this comment Rutu. Big smile

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 1:36pm | IP Logged
I'm glad I came back to check Nidz...luved this one for the simplicity it echoed...I had a feeling of watching a wellscripted telefilm...I culd imagine our fav characters enacting the whole part in front of me...all the interactions between them had a natural feel to it...like Gargi pointed out, u brought out the camaraderie between them so effectively, there was an unstated ease in each other's presence and a sense of trust too that the line wuldnt b crossed...the gesture of him buying a gift for her to celebrate their year-long acquaintance after an indifferent start and resting at a mutually warming companionship was adorable...the paratha sequence was described with ur exceptional touch and I really enjoyed the way u ended the OS ... 

Ur mind is so truely a treasureWink of ideas and ur so naturally made for writing that even if u wish u cant stay away from it for long...so I hav no worries on that part...          

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 1:45pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by meevee

I'm glad I came back to check Nidz...luved this one for the simplicity it echoed...I had a feeling of watching a wellscripted telefilm Well that's a new compliment. LOL...I culd imagine our fav characters enacting the whole part in front of me...all the interactions between them had a natural feel to it...like Gargi pointed out, u brought out the camaraderie between them so effectively, there was an unstated ease in each other's presence and a sense of trust too that the line wuldnt b crossed I love you Meera! You get me!Shocked Hug...the gesture of him buying a gift for her to celebrate their year-long acquaintance after an indifferent start and resting at a mutually warming companionship was adorable...the paratha sequence was described with ur exceptional touch and I really enjoyed the way u ended the OS ... iBlush like a tomato. Blushing

Ur mind is so truely a treasureWink of ideas and ur so naturally made for writing that even if u wish u cant stay away from it for long...so I hav no worries on that part... Naturally made for writing? Well that's flattering. Embarrassed         

Thank you so much Meera. You always seem to get the essence of my writing. It's an honour to read a comment from you, really. Basically I just love you. Hug

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 1:47pm | IP Logged
AWWHHH, that was a really sweet OS !!! Love how Sharon tolerates everything Swayam does no matter how much it irritates her !! And Swayam dancing to I like to move it, move it was hilarious !!! Though Swayam behaves like a brat at times, it was so sweet that he remembered their anniversaries as roomies and actually got her something to celebrate the day with !!! And the ending where he goes to sleep in her bed again just like in the beginning was perfect !!

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 1:50pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ABBY92

AWWHHH, that was a really sweet OS !!! Love how Sharon tolerates everything Swayam does no matter how much it irritates her !! And Swayam dancing to I like to move it, move it was hilarious !!! I would so like to see Swayam actually do that on the show. LOLThough Swayam behaves like a brat at times, it was so sweet that he remembered their anniversaries as roomies and actually got her something to celebrate the day with !!! And the ending where he goes to sleep in her bed again just like in the beginning was perfect !!

Thank you for commenting Abby. Big smile
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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 1:52pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sawyer_Tom

 Don't get ideas, woman! It's humid in Mumbai! LOL


I seriously had this doubt Ermm like even in the beginning!!
And besides its chilly in Mumbai at night, unless you have shut your windows tight!!

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 1:59pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Rutu

Originally posted by Sawyer_Tom

 Don't get ideas, woman! It's humid in Mumbai! LOL


I seriously had this doubt Ermm like even in the beginning!!
And besides its chilly in Mumbai at night, unless you have shut your windows tight!!

Do you really want me to get into the backstory? LOL Fine, then. It's summer. The windows are closed because there is a constant attack from the spiteful mosquitoes. They are not so well off that they can afford to install an AC. And nobody likes to sleep with the blanket nor do they like to sleep without the blanket. Keeping all that in mind, plus the fact that Swayam finds it comfortable to sleep without his shirt, is the reason why he was shirtless. 

Are you satisfied, woman? LOL

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 2:05pm | IP Logged
Thanks for in-detail description and for discreteness LOL
Me satisfied nowEvil Smile

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