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A OneShot a Day: A SwaRon Collection (Page 30)

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 10:10am | IP Logged
RES 

and thanks Embarrassed
Promise both the RES will be edited by today. 

Nidhi Hug

I can't stop but marvel how different each of your OS themes have been.
This one i loved in particular as it got me reminiscing my good old hostel days. I could relate to everything..well not everything LOL 
I loved everything about this OS, the simple yet captivating plot and the seamless friendship between swaRon. 
The part where you mention Sharon's anger could make the russian proud - very well thought and thats so apt to say the least. Sharon and Swayam character came forward very different and i found Swayam's character very intriguing, i wish this OS continued Embarrassed
And i thank you from the bottom of my heart for this OS marathon dear - you know how tough times have been with SwaRon close to killed and graved Dead 
Please show us some mercy and write more often as you can. 
Loads of Love

Sudha 



Edited by Sudha-SK - 09 September 2012 at 3:27pm

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 10:14am | IP Logged
Res... thanks Sudha!
unres

A mush-free, somewhat platonic n yet highly satisfying swaron os! Right from the "pinggg" in the beginning to sharon's murderous plans in the end, put on hold primarily due to sleep and partly owing to the sudden gush of affection the gift hd brought forth, this was one endearing piece!!

For me the highlight of this os was swayam.. n dat never happens.. u know that i usually hv my eyes for sharon in anything i read on them n u changed that for me!! so i cn either charge u for messing with my headStern Smile or thank u for a completely different experience!Embarrassed! Roommates hs bin ur coolest best! and more importantly, swayam's!!Cool for instance..
He ran a hand through his hair, which she knew was his coping mechanism when he couldn't remember something.
so he breaks his bed, snuggles into sharon's bed shirtless n takes a while to recall wat hd happend!! Swayam has never impressd me more!! And the fact that he loves jumping on the bed reminds me of joey n with this d silly grin on my face widens!!
Its really amazing how u broke this ONESHOT into a no. f scenes!Tongue 
ok seriously..i  loved the flow in which one scene followed another.. sharon kicking him out of bed, the funny scene in the bathroom, the paratha scene n finally the gift and the retiring-fr-the-day scene.. It gives us a glipmse of their everyday life.. This os is not about a particular happening or incident.. its a random day from their life which can't get anymore interesting to a reader!! i hvnt written much bt i know that more random a concept gets its harder to kp ppl engrossed bt u hv managed dat well.. Hug


p.s. i see dat u hv replied to all comments this time...!!Tongue



Edited by lyfisbeautiful - 13 September 2012 at 12:33am

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 11:35am | IP Logged
 What should I say !! It was mind blowing as usual...Clap Clap

But m so sad to hear that it was the last one... CryBroken Heart Got so addicted reading to ur brilliant pieces everyday... Plz Plz !! do not stop and continue writing themm...Nuke

We all love and wait for ur OS... Plz don't stop...Smile


Edited by abhilasha_dream - 09 September 2012 at 11:36am

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 11:36am | IP Logged
Nidhi that was  superb Os..
Yup Swayam was there and was  maker her angry..
Vaise bhi she looks cute in anger...]
It was cute...
 And the gift  cute...

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 11:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by abhilasha_dream

 What should I say !! It was mind blowing as usual...Clap Clap

But m so sad to hear that it was the last one... CryBroken Heart Got so addicted reading to ur brilliant pieces everyday... Plz Plz !! do not stop and continue writing themm...Nuke

We all love and wait for ur OS... Plz don't stop...Smile

Thank you so much. Big smile But I have to stop. I can't keep up with myself if I continue writing. Sorry but I have to end it here. 

Originally posted by asmaju

Nidhi that was  superb Os..
Yup Swayam was there and was  maker her angry..
Vaise bhi she looks cute in anger...]
It was cute...
 And the gift  cute...

Thanks. Big smile Like my friend Sudha says 'Inka kuch nahi ho sakta.' LOL

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 11:43am | IP Logged
Okay, so just one thing. You can rock anything, any genre as effortlessly and stylishly like you're eating a candyfloss. 
urm..sorry thats the only analogy that hit my mind right now :P 
From LTD to this, such different stories! You know, i still read LTD and every time i think you cant get better than this, you hit back with a bang. So your talent deserves a huge applause! Star

Thank you so much for giving us one heck of a thread, with one heck of awesome stories!

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 11:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by D3fication

Okay, so just one thing. You can rock anything, any genre as effortlessly and stylishly like you're eating a candyfloss. That is the sweetest thing anybody has ever told me. No pun intended. LOL 
urm..sorry thats the only analogy that hit my mind right now :P 
From LTD to this, such different stories! You know, i still read LTD and every time i think you cant get better than this, you hit back with a bang. It's so nice to hear that you still read LTD. Embarrassed So your talent deserves a huge applause! Star

Thank you so much for giving us one heck of a thread, with one heck of awesome stories!

Thank you so much for appreciating my work. Big smile

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 11:57am | IP Logged

amazing os
how are you able to come up with such a wonderful updates
very cute , sweet and lovely os

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