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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 11:24am | IP Logged


wow amazing

aryan has to suffer a lot

from his love birds parents

and the foreplay was awesome

Sharon teases swayam

love it

how can swayam back-off so easily

poor Sharon

love all.ur updates


Edited by -swaron- - 07 September 2012 at 11:34am

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 11:48am | IP Logged
Nidhi...I never thought it was possible to actually pen down sumthing like this situation with the finesse that u hav done - I mean the second part of the OS Swayam's turn...u brought bac the Swayam I fell in luv with in the first place...the cool customer...the tormentor ended up being tormented in the end...I always luv it when Sharon tries to behave as if she holds all the aces in her hand and Swayam turns the tables on her in his own ishtyle...the apparent and the obvious balanced each other so wonderfully in the first part also when Sharon was giving the demo...little did she know she wuld need to pay a heavy price for tickling her luver boy's senses and playing around with it...perfectly straight title I must say Smile

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 12:21pm | IP Logged
OMG, this was just awesome !! I loved how Sharon teased him in the beginning !! Can never imagine Sharon being so bold in front  of everyone but that would be an awesome sight to see !! The way Swayam quickly volunteered himself was hilarious !! Boy didn't know what he was getting himself in to !!

Sharon actually running her hands all over him in front of the whole gang was pretty amusing and the reactions that got out from the gang was equally amusing !! But Swayam got his revenge too !! By tempting Sharon with the sweet pleasure of a kiss just enough, making her want it so bad and then pulling away right before the end moment !! He's so bad but I loved that !!

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 12:50pm | IP Logged
OMG.. what was this Nidhi Shocked 
i never knew Sharon could do somethng like this.. kiss demo LOL
poor swayam didnt know what to do at the first..
then he to played the same foreplay with her...
this was such a romantic OS... loved it so much... 

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 1:49pm | IP Logged
Oh my God, Who are you kidding was awesome !! ROFL ROFL
So apt, I could actually see it happening ! A cute kid, calm Swayam, glaring Sharon
Her stupid arguments, Swayam's ever-so-calm attitude and flirty answers...god ! He's amazing

And foreplay was Embarrassed
Superb ! I love the teasing !
Fab work dear ! LOVED it a lot !!

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 3:19pm | IP Logged
aww.. Now this was a very cute OS! :) 
loved the whole way on how sharon taught him about Kissing.. 
and the final small peck should have prolonged, loved the whole Parts! :) 

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 3:22pm | IP Logged
Res!
*edited*

Okay i am really sorry for not replying to the last two OS's..i thought i would get a pm wen you update the next so...Ermm
Anyways its fine..thankfully you vil start the pm givng from next tym! LOL
include me too!! Smile


2. With Great Power Comes Great Responsibility

It was highly adorable..swaron playing together in the playground was well portrayed! swayam sighed wen sharon declared the same game name..that they play everyday..was funny LOL
sharon giving orders..perfect diva in childhood! poor swayam! Embarrassed
and wen she got sad and angry on him was awww..Heart
and den again they went back together..was just perfect ending to it!
Super cute! Smile

3. Whom Are You 'Kid'ding?

LOL! aryan shekhawat! poor soul! LOL
swayam and sharon fighting on a sexy joke! haha dude it was hillarious! LOL
and swayam seriously never fails to bring a bad blush on her diva's cheeks!! Embarrassed
i loved the convo's and aryan's childhood memories brought up in between!
and in the end!
aryan's parents were found kissing in the dining! Smile

haha loved it! Big smile

4. Foreplay

Oh mahn nidhi!
 you just wrote true awesomeness here! concept was exceptionally mindblowing! Clap
when i thought sharon has just thrown off swayam..you proved me wrong..The Foreplay is like..nobody looses here! and i just heart that! Heart
i am just blushing lyk a idiot after reading this so i vil sign off for now! Embarrassed


p.s.--Now i think i deserve a pm for your next works Embarrassed



Edited by surbhimathur - 08 September 2012 at 5:07am

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