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A OneShot a Day: A SwaRon Collection (Page 19)

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 3:09am | IP Logged
dat was so cute...poor aryan...n awsum swaron arguement...aryan tell ur mother, aryan tell ur father...LOLLOLLOL

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 4:07am | IP Logged
Awesome update Nidhi :) :)!!
Loved it
the whole concept of SwaRon as parents n a teenage kid!..woah..
The verbal ping-pong match beautifully penned down,i cn so imagine sharon shouting n swayum being all calm n then givng all those witty replies :)

and the way you shown the similarities btw swayum n aryan..loved that!!
Aryan so loved his hair back then too. Poor kid had to loose it..but amzing part.
I loved the ending..the whole semmed realistic n from a teenages POV.
Your works are alwaz a treat to treat. Waiting for the next part eagerly :) :)

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 4:27am | IP Logged
Another mind blowing OS ..wow
loved it...
i am getting addicted to your OneShots's...its far better than the current track of D3
you are truly a lifesaver
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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 4:30am | IP Logged
That was really cute! :) :)
Sharon and Swayam are never gonna stop fighting! :)

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 5:10am | IP Logged
great one

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 5:12am | IP Logged
Awesome OS Nidhi. Poor boy! Wonder what wrong he did in his past lives to have to go through this every day. LOL I really liked how the entire OS was from his point of view. That was quite a different thought. It is totally unsurprised for the boy to see what he did in the end. :D

Sorry I haven't been able to read the other two One Shots you wrote. I'll read them as I get time. Really busy these days what with my exams coming up.

Thank you for the PM(s). :)

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 5:14am | IP Logged
Edited on page 16 Big smile

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 5:17am | IP Logged
Nidhi, I owe an apology to you dear. Of late, I have been busy with my studies, so couldn't comment earlier. Please forgive this pitiable creature for being lateCry
Firstly, I loved the entire idea of having a SwaRon OS marathon. It's a happy desertion from the disappointing episodes.
Coming to the very first OS, the title itself was so intriguing- Wilhelm Wundt- The Conversation Starter, wow. Loved Sharon's apprehensiveness and Swayum's composure. The way you ended it was simply marvellous.
The second OS was truly delightful. Swayum being possessive and Sharon being her usual self was totally a treat to read on. The last line of the OS sums up Swayum the best.  Brilliantly written Nidhi.
The most recent OneShort is a masterpiece. Reading it from Aryan's POV was refreshing indeed. Sharon glaring at Swayum and his disarming replies were perfectly penned down. The toothpaste incident was also very much relatable. Enjoyed the verbal ping pong match very much.
The amount of maturity that Aaryan portrays is commendable. The entire plot was brilliantly depicted from a teenager's POV.
I sincerely apologise the delay Nidhi. You are some of the insanely talented people that our forum is blessed with. Smile

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