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A OneShot a Day: A SwaRon Collection (Page 13)

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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 10:48am | IP Logged
Res.. wil read n unres by tonight!!!Hug
unres

Yet another OS on swaron with an entirely different feel to it! Who wud hv thot that we cud imagine Sharon and swayam as kid buddies bonding over swing rides and relate to them just the same!! Only u can mk them do it n yet be so convincingly swaron!! This is so freaking adorable!! This is the obvious appreciation this os will fetch u! m sure most of us feel this is the cutest swaron hv ever bin but if we cum to think of it what made it a treat to read was the constant connection we cud make with the swaron we know! You may urself call this os childish but i'l refrain from doing so as underlying it all lies our basic understanding of swaron!

If i were to imagine them as kids i wud definitely imagine sharon as the bully and swayam as the victimLOL so no surprises there but what pleasantly surprised me was how confidently she claimed to be the princess in his life! We know sharon likes reminding and reassuring herself of the special place she has in swayam's life and it was wonderful to see how as a child she needed this security just the same!! she devised the perfect game for them!! As for swayam he by default wud end up enjoying watevr sharon enjoyed whether he realised that or not! And a role reversal was something that wud never work. It was fun to see him try though.. how innocently he wondered what he wanted sharon to do for him!! few years down the line he'l know that he only wants her by his side and nothing else but his current disappointment at not hving found an order was very cute indeed!!Embarrassed

The dialogs cudnt hv bin better..! special mention to the description of sharon's backyard. Whats funny is that i can't really find lines to quote which devoted itself entirely to its description and so how i cud easily picturise it with a swing, a dirty fountain and bellflowers is beyond me!!Stern Smile guess its one of those things associated with ur writing genius dat we'l nvr get!!
And now my favourite bit.. very obvious..

"Now what are you smiling about? I'm still your Princess!" she said, once again assuming her haughty mode.

"As you always will be." He said, smiling.


A big thank you for such a cute and lovely os n a sincere apology for editing after such a long time!! Love u for bearing with me.. and for writing this ofcourse!Hug



Edited by lyfisbeautiful - 28 September 2012 at 9:36am

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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 10:58am | IP Logged
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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 11:04am | IP Logged
wow dis was so cutie one..!!

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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 11:06am | IP Logged
It might be childish. But it's beautiful.

Though I still don't get the full reference to the title.

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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 11:14am | IP Logged
Pree, me headings hardly make sense. And even more rarely are they in any way connected to the story. I used this one here to portray that giving orders isn't all fun and games. It requires proper groundwork, stability and intuition. Ermm

Go figure!

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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 11:17am | IP Logged
wow nidhi i cannot think a love story can be this much cute in first place...and that swaron in childhood...wow factor is that you have really made us think k swaron sach me bachme kitne cute rahe honge...really a childhood love story is awsome idea...

thank you for pm...

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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 11:39am | IP Logged
hey..it was cho...cheuttt...loved-
'only i have the right to pull ur ponytail'...

really its great to read ur writings...it was full of innocence,love&affection,loved young cutie-pie swaron very muchieee...

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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 11:49am | IP Logged
Awesome os...luved the junior version of SwaRon...d innocence in their love is very well written by u...d tiara made by swayam for sharon was so cute...n really liked the ending princess dialogue of SwaRon.

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