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I liked the idea behind this, Sharon-Swayam's wife who is seven months pregnant and has the sole right to go through his diary be it for being his ardhangini or for the weird urges that surf up for being in that state!!
And Nidhi the dates which you have chosen for Sharon to read, are like one of the episodes which created history in their supposedly fairy-tale!!!
To start with 6th October was that scene from where SwaRon got imbibed in me. But I know you included the classroom scene more, but it was the scrap book sequence that introduced me to SwaRon world. The description of their first meet when he was sure that he would get her know the original self and also the locker room scene was terrific.
Anyways I wanted to read Swayam's all letters addressed to her as and when they met, but then the OS would turn into FF I guess. Never mind I am presuming the scene following hereafter in the form of letter would include the abandoned staircase scene. If I am not mistaken!!!
Eagerly waiting to read the next part.
Edited by Rutu - 11 years ago