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Sawyer_Tom
Sawyer_Tom @Sawyer_Tom IF-Dazzler
Anniversary 12 Group Promotion 4 + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by ---Priya---


Nidhi... what should i say about ur writing skill... its just awesome girl...👏
if this the last OS of this marathon, then its definitely a Grand Finale.. Hee. 😃

i had a smile throughout, while i was reading this OS.. iLike. 😃
from star to end, i was able to picturize each and every scene 😃
i just loved the end, where u stopped it at the place where it started from... 
your writing made me fall for SwaRon again.. Yikes! HUGE Compliment! 😲
great work... i just loved it 😃

Thanks so much Priya. 😃
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-Snehaa-
Sneha @-Snehaa- Goldie
Anniversary 12 Group Promotion 3 + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
That was chooo chweet and adorable! :)

Swaron as roommates! :D :D Hard to believe! :) :)

She definitely has a crush on him and he does too! :D <3 

When r they gonna accept it?

I'm so in love with this OS! :) :) <3 <3 <3 <3

The bathroom scene...:D :D :D And then her admiring the bracelet :) And then Swayam hopping on to her bed again! :D
<3 <3
Love Love Love! :D
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ShrutikaSwaRon
ShrutikaSwaRon @ShrutikaSwaRon IF-Dazzler
Anniversary 11 Group Promotion 4 + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome os...liked the concept...luved the bathroom swaron convo...even liked the gift n the way swaron gift wrapped it...luved how she doesnot have patience but tolerated swayam...beutifully described by u the entire os...was lenghty but worth reading...thnx for pm.
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Nirju99
Nirjana @Nirju99 IF-Dazzler
Anniversary 12 Group Promotion 3 Networker 3
Posted: 11 years ago
best update ever
luv it
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surbhimathur
surbhimathur @surbhimathur IF-Rockerz
Anniversary 12 Group Promotion 5 + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
edited my last comment 
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3179353&PID=64714668�

ROOM-MATES! 😃

Wow dude..u write freaking cool!! and this was way cooler! 
i adored the bonding between Swa-Ron here!
and loved how swayam irritated sharon! 
sharon fussed over her cheese parantha was sumthing really natural 
but the sweet gesture in the end by swayam was adorable! 😳
LOL he slid in her bed again! 😆
Do update more nidhi..its really awesome to read your works! 
take ur tym but do write more!
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pratik54000
pratik vyas @pratik54000 IF-Rockerz
Anniversary 12 Group Promotion 5 + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
both the os were superb and full of life...i am glad to read those os..thank you for pm...do write more..sorry a bit in hurry so no long comments...
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Radioactive.
Radioactive. @Radioactive. IF-Dazzler
Anniversary 12 Group Promotion 4 Networker 3
Posted: 11 years ago
Your last OS was brilliant. And I'm talking about, "If you could see me now". I really liked the idea of her being a blind girl. The concept was really touching. I'll read the latest OS soon and give a comment as well. :)

Thank you for the PM
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--Tanzz--
Tania @--Tanzz-- IF-Dazzler
Anniversary 11 Group Promotion 3 + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
Again you nailed it girl!!the way you portrayed swaron friendship is just super awesome!! Nidhi you are really a factory of outstanding ideas!!please return back with a new one soon & be a lifesaver to all SWARON fans.god bless... love tania;)
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Sawyer_Tom
Sawyer_Tom @Sawyer_Tom IF-Dazzler
Anniversary 12 Group Promotion 4 + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by damonelena


That was chooo chweet and adorable! :)

Swaron as roommates! :D :D Hard to believe! :) :)

She definitely has a crush on him and he does too! :D <3 

When r they gonna accept it?

I'm so in love with this OS! :) :) <3 <3 <3 <3

The bathroom scene...:D :D :D And then her admiring the bracelet :) And then Swayam hopping on to her bed again! :D
<3 <3
Love Love Love! :D

Thank you so much for commenting. 😃 I don't know about a crush but they are definitely very fond of each other. 
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Sawyer_Tom
Sawyer_Tom @Sawyer_Tom IF-Dazzler
Anniversary 12 Group Promotion 4 + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by ShrutikaSwaRon


Awesome os...liked the concept...luved the bathroom swaron convo...even liked the gift n the way swaron gift wrapped it...luved how she doesnot have patience but tolerated swayam...beutifully described by u the entire os...was lenghty but worth reading...thnx for pm.

Thanks a ton. 😃 I thought so too that it was a bit lengthy but I don't think it would have been the same if I had shortened it. 😳
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