A OneShot a Day: A SwaRon Collection - Page 17

Oh my God, Who are you kidding was awesome !! 🤣 🤣
So apt, I could actually see it happening ! A cute kid, calm Swayam, glaring Sharon
Her stupid arguments, Swayam's ever-so-calm attitude and flirty answers...god ! He's amazing

And foreplay was 😳
Superb ! I love the teasing !
Fab work dear ! LOVED it a lot !!

edited!!:D

aww.. Now this was a very cute OS! :) 
loved the whole way on how sharon taught him about Kissing.. 
and the final small peck should have prolonged, loved the whole Parts! :) 

Res!
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Okay i am really sorry for not replying to the last two OS's..i thought i would get a pm wen you update the next so...🤔
Anyways its fine..thankfully you vil start the pm givng from next tym! 😆
include me too!! 😊

Edited by surbhimathur - 11 years ago

wooow it ws soo romantic...loved d naughty sharon nd i cud see d reaction of d whole gang wen she came up to teach dem hw to kiss😆...d reactions of both sharon and swayam during d foreplay ws superb...it ws a very different concept...really loved reading it😛

Just loved d foreplay
Pehle sharon swayam to tease far rahi thi
Magar swayam me to bichari ki bolti band kar di
Amazing concept
I hope sharon dubara kabhi apne bf ke samne bold nhi banegi
Nhi to bechari ko kaise kaise foreplays jhelne padenge

Tit for Tat, swayam is the best.😆. Poor sharon, how can she ever get back her senses. After reading the OS i was in seventh heaven Nidhi you are mindblowing, the concept simply different, only you  can one think of such an instance, Hats off to you. So swaronish It is just out of the world. Thanks so much for such a fab OS. I cant contol my smile, swaron are a beautiful but you have made them all the more alluring. 

👏wow awsum...swaron playin with each other is so fun 2 watch😆

This was amazing ! Sharon being so bold infront of everyone and teasing Swayam and last part of the OS was written beautifully ! 👏