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An OS a day, and that also by one of the best writers on this forum.
What gets better??
Well loved the first OS, it was really innocent and sweet.
A really good read.
Wish it was longer though.
Originally posted by: D3rocksss
Srry for late reply
I am looking forward d marthon i would be a treat to read
1st os was amazing
Loved d way you added some twist to d characters
N sharon slowly falling for sWayam
D cindrella joke was sereously d worst pj ever
I dont want you to cOntinue it
As d ending was just d way it sould be
N 1 more thing
U write beautifully
#Sorry for turning up so late.I was much occupied with things,lately.🤔
Anyways this,Woah! OS marathon.Twas a need of the hour,the SwaRon track these days leaves everyone depressed,most of the times,now.😳 Sad but true. SwaRon nowadays is painful to watch.I always like what you write.You are genius when it comes to concepts. Hee☺️ So far,I have loved all your establishments.Though,you must have not seen me around ,commenting on your works,but I did read everything! LTD,SS or OS's!Things didn't let me be active here much,those days.The first OS here made me a simple and sweet read.Sharon's mannerisms, her inhibitions to start a conversation with Swayam are portrayed well.The OS had a much realistic feel.The ending,makes me thinking what next.This was refreshing enough. I was going for the realistic approach. I think I go for that every time. And like I've said before, the ending is supposed to make you think about what would happen next.Thanks for the PMs.Apologies again, for turning up late.😳-Neha.
Originally posted by: shantanu.swayam
An OS a day, and that also by one of the best writers on this forum.
What gets better??Well loved the first OS, it was really innocent and sweet.A really good read.Wish it was longer though.
Originally posted by: Suku_SwaRon
Nidhi are we so lucky to get an OS almost everyday😲, now my reaction after the shock🥳Nidhi you are an awesome writer yaar. I adore your works, it is simple short but the best. The way you pen down each and every word is a treat for all of us. Thanks so so much for writing such a beautiful OS. I loved the end part when he said "I know sharon" and her reaction that I thought he doesnt know me. It is so realistic, normally it happens to us too. Thanks once again.
Originally posted by: surbhimathur
Woah! did you wrote that for real..are we gonna read an OS...almost regularly from you!! 😲
Nidhi you are bloody awesome mahn! Thanx a lot for dis..! 😃
and cuming to the first OS..
It was really nycc!!
you are friggin' awesome wen it cums to writing OS's nd stuf so i really dun feel a need to mention dis!
Sharon cracked a PJ here...🤔
lol she drools at him lyk a total jerk!! 😆
and in the end "sharon..i know that"
awesome! 😳
Waiting for the next!
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