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Arhi FF|Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| *Complete!* #3 (Page 94)

Oliver.Queen IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 12 May 2013 at 8:28pm | IP Logged
It was such a great update! Wonderfully written as always. I like the way you are slowly showing the strength and the bonding in Arnav and khushi's relationship. I liked the part where Khushi explains to Arnav the complexities of his guilty feeling. Great job. 

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Arjuhisis IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 12 May 2013 at 8:34pm | IP Logged
fabulous update nafisa
not upto the mark??????????? no way - it surpassed the excellent mark
well done dear

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jtammareddy Senior Member
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Posted: 12 May 2013 at 9:05pm | IP Logged
Awesome update. One single lie by anjali about Shyam's phone call has sent things spiraling . Khushi and Arnav relationship is changing in many dimensions. They can understand each other by one single word what other is trying to do. Arnav has been her pillar for a while now. Now it's khushi's turn.

Thanks for the pm.

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desisoaps05 Senior Member
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Posted: 12 May 2013 at 9:08pm | IP Logged
oh my goosshhh. Definitely waited forever for that update, and choked up reading those words right along with Khushi :')Clap

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Posted: 12 May 2013 at 9:14pm | IP Logged
Here I am tired after a long Mother's Day, in bed with the iPad after turning down my hubby's request to  watch Gamesof Thrones that I simply adore and what do I see?  An update of my favorite FF!   Sleep be gone and I had to read it this even with your warning about the length.  I love it.  Arnav's torture about Shyam and having to choose, to avenge his wife was as usual beautifully penned.  Lots of words but they were needed to describe what he was going through.  And their conversation, uff you are too good at this.  I could picture this so vividly because of how you took the time to set it up.  This is the talk they should have had after the abduction not when Anjali lost her baby in the show.  I love how she reminded him of their wedding vows and how he does not have to fight this all by himself as she will be there with him.
I don't get PM from you, I stalk as I love this story.  It will make it easier if I get PM.

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Posted: 12 May 2013 at 9:19pm | IP Logged
They have come out quite strong

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Posted: 12 May 2013 at 9:54pm | IP Logged
Haiii

That was so beautiful. Heatfelt convo between the both of them. Loved it

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LeenaRocks IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 12 May 2013 at 10:09pm | IP Logged
ohh i missed this so much! 

how i wished things had been this way in the show as well! *sigh*

This was a beautiful update! eager to know what will happen next!


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