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Arhi FF|Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| *Complete!* #3 (Page 93)

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 2:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by hiahmed

welcome back. though i would just tell u one thing. dont let one plagiarist rob ur loyal readers of the pleasure of reading ur work. as it is the updates are few and far in bw; yet enjoyable. the relationship of arshi portrayed is  beautiful

Hey! Thank you so much for your support and motivation - at the end of the day it is the loyal readers for whom I'm still writing and posting for here, and I'm so grateful for your continuing support :) Thank you!! I'm glad you found the chapter enjoyable :) 

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 2:19am | IP Logged

Originally posted by Surya.Ravi

good update..Smile

Thank you!
Originally posted by kamtokdin

You are BACK!!!

:D :D YUP!! 

Originally posted by crazymg.04

niceClap

Thanks!! 

Originally posted by sonia_92

stunning chapter sweetheart. I absolutely loved how arnav declared his right over khushi, that was beautiful

Oh, thank you so much!!! I'm so glad you thought so!! :D Thrilled that you enjoyed it :) 

Originally posted by vks11

Hi,
 I read the story in one go, sitting up the whole night yesterday. I loved it. You have created magic with words.

What can I say. No words.Clap




Hi! I'm so happy you've enjoyed it so far, and hope you'll enjoy it in the future as well!! Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts, and for your PM - it was very sweet of you :) Thank you!

Originally posted by smile1412

Lovely! Thnx for continuing this wonderful  story!!!!! Naughty Arnav is cute !!!


Hey!! Thank you for reading and letting me know what you thought!! So glad you enjoyed it :) It means a lot to me :) 

Originally posted by Sniggy24

awesome !!!! Thanks for coming Back :)

Thank you!! And thanks for having me back :P 
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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 2:44am | IP Logged
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Originally posted by AngelTeen

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Originally posted by AngelTeen


I think I've fractured my jaw coz I grinned so hard just seeing your comment :P I've sooo missed reading your posts on IF - and I mean everything, stories, discussions, comments - everything :)

Eeeps! Arnav and Khushi being all cute and adorable! Me like!! Was this the first time Khushi used her trademark "Hawww!" in this story?

Lol, come to think of it, I think this is the first time she used her 'Hawww!' in here...I guess up until now I didn't reckon Khushi comfortable enough with Arnav's advances to do it - but now that she's told him she loves him, why hold back? LOL Super pleased you're liking the cuteness!

Nafisa, it was just so adorable how they both didn't want to part but it kind of makes it more romantic na? Sort of like the times before weddings we see on TV, something ArHi of this story never had...sigh.

I might be able to do something about that *winkwinknudgenudge* But can't reveal anymore :P But must say I almost clapped with glee seeing you say that - that's kind of what this was intended to be. Technically they just got engaged, and now there's a symbolic 'off-period' that's similar to the gap between engagement and wedding :D Honestly I love you for noticing that!

And somewhere this companionship, this love will help the changed Anjali too and not just as a source of inspiration but rather a fortified shield...she will have a unified ArHi to depend upon. One more thing I wanted to congratulate you on was your character of Anjali and how it is so great to see a smart, independent Anjali instead of the hackneyed version of her a number of writers punish her with.

*Nods enthusiastically* Yes, yes, yes, you're absolutely right!!! I always go over the moon reading your comments for this very reason - you pick out exactly what I want to say, or want to show, or want to foreshadow, and it makes me feel like I haven't just typed absolute nonsense on my screen :P Thank you SOOO much!!!!

I'll also add that I had high hopes for Anjali at one point - she was blindly in love with Shyam, yes, but her family and their happiness was her priority, and in my mind THAT Anjali would not just sit down with her hands tied if she perceived any threat towards them. So I'm on cloud 9 literally that you liked her characterisation here!! Thank you, thank you, thank you!!!

Aap humein kyon thankya rahin hain? Likha aapne itna phantastic hai ki hum toh aise hi comment karenge. :p

*blush*blush*grin*blush*blush*

I understand how a writer feels when a reader grasps what they were trying to say but you are such a fantastic writer that you provide ample clues as to get there. Also I know for one that you arent the regular writers on IF who will take out their mann ki bharaas on Anjali and thereby give her a proper characterization...so yeah. :)

Honestly if I blush any harder I think my blood pressure will rise. Not to mention my ego inflating to the size of my room and suffocating me :P But thank you, thank you, thank you! If you were anywhere near me I'd scare the life out of you with a back-breaking hug :P 

Anjali, and for that matter all characters of IPKKND in general, were very well etched out with massive possibilities which were sadly left unexplored and many a times ruthlessly shunned. Glad to see you taking her out of that darkness and exploring some facets of her personality. :)

Yes, I completely, thoroughly agree with you. Anji in particular, in my opinion, was just plain abused as a character both on the show and as a result on the IPK forums and fanfiction. She went through the same ordeal as her brother, maybe even more so on a level because the tragedy happened on her wedding day, the day she probably dreamed about and fantasised, scarring her. She's just as damaged as Arnav, just dealing with it differently. The sad thing is she never got that shot at redeeming herself that Arnav got - and this goes for so many other people, like Mami, Akash - though Payal comes to mind more prominently. Maybe that's why Anji and Payal are two of my favourite side-characters to explore :) 

And I miss writing on IF too but somewhere I think some sort of saturation point (non fiction because of IPKKND ending and nothing else really catching my attention and fiction because of a variery of reasons) seems to have been reached relating to that...lets see now...thanks anyway for your kind words. :)

I can understand what you mean, but I just have to say this - you are one of the very few, out of maybe three or four, writers that I've devoutly followed since picking up fanfiction here, and that's because there's a flair and a genuineness to whatever you write that' s very refreshing and addictive, kind of. Your characters are so well mapped I can relate to them instantly, language so lucid and clear it carries you away, and creativity that leaves me in awe every single time. I know that with the show ending and the plagiarism nonsense and the restrictions a personal blog imposes are all constraints but - you are a very, very talented writer who touches the depths of characters and makes them come alive like they're real, not just puppets doing what you want them to do. Please never give up on writing - it has more heart than the majority of what I've read on Arhi so far. 

The thing you said about Anjali...you are my soul sister! I have argued the same thing so many times with so many people! 

Anjali suffered just like Arnav did and maybe even more and the fact is that she dealt with it differently - probably in a way worse than Arnav who at least vent it out time to time. She kept it all bottled up and let it give rise to insecurities and beliefs etc making her by far more prone to breakdown than Arnav. Also she never got a chance to get out of it using her own strength of character or drawing strengths from others like Arnav did and hence blaming her for being insecure or chipkoo or weak is just stupid because she wasnt given an opportunity to ever properly explore the one within.

It's like listening to myself talking. Those are e-x-a-c-t-l-y my thoughts. Anjali was never given a chance. Khushi managed to save Arnav from himself, but Anji in the show was left broken. That's why I kind of ended up launching a crusade to justify her. I remember early on I used to be really afraid of what might happen to her - Arnav believed the worst of everything and was more likely to see that things weren't as horrible as he preferred to see, to keep himself prepared. He could be taught what 'hope' was. But Anji was the opposite, believing the best in everything, willingly living a perfect but false reality which was bound to break down someday - and to go through the same thing twice over... And yet, she could have been so strong, given the chance. 

And about the last bit...*Blushes a deep red* 

Its people like you who make me rethink this decision of sorts again and again...so not my fault, people! Thank You so much for your kind words. Much humbled. :)

Don't say thank you - you deserve all the appreciation you get and more. I admit that my reasons for urging you to keep going are partly selfish - I just love reading your work that much :P ;) - but I kind of think writing is a part of who you are, and hopefully you'll be able to reconcile with that part when you feel you can :) 

@Bold - I hear ya. 

Anjali was a beautiful complex character who was never given her due.

And about the last part...I am grateful for support like yours and I dont think I can really give up writing...its just that the recent happenings around IF make me wary...anyway, what do you say to the fact that an OS idea is brewing in my mind somewhere... ;) :D

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 2:58am | IP Logged
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I think I've fractured my jaw coz I grinned so hard just seeing your comment :P I've sooo missed reading your posts on IF - and I mean everything, stories, discussions, comments - everything :)

Eeeps! Arnav and Khushi being all cute and adorable! Me like!! Was this the first time Khushi used her trademark "Hawww!" in this story?

Lol, come to think of it, I think this is the first time she used her 'Hawww!' in here...I guess up until now I didn't reckon Khushi comfortable enough with Arnav's advances to do it - but now that she's told him she loves him, why hold back? LOL Super pleased you're liking the cuteness!

Nafisa, it was just so adorable how they both didn't want to part but it kind of makes it more romantic na? Sort of like the times before weddings we see on TV, something ArHi of this story never had...sigh.

I might be able to do something about that *winkwinknudgenudge* But can't reveal anymore :P But must say I almost clapped with glee seeing you say that - that's kind of what this was intended to be. Technically they just got engaged, and now there's a symbolic 'off-period' that's similar to the gap between engagement and wedding :D Honestly I love you for noticing that!

And somewhere this companionship, this love will help the changed Anjali too and not just as a source of inspiration but rather a fortified shield...she will have a unified ArHi to depend upon. One more thing I wanted to congratulate you on was your character of Anjali and how it is so great to see a smart, independent Anjali instead of the hackneyed version of her a number of writers punish her with.

*Nods enthusiastically* Yes, yes, yes, you're absolutely right!!! I always go over the moon reading your comments for this very reason - you pick out exactly what I want to say, or want to show, or want to foreshadow, and it makes me feel like I haven't just typed absolute nonsense on my screen :P Thank you SOOO much!!!!

I'll also add that I had high hopes for Anjali at one point - she was blindly in love with Shyam, yes, but her family and their happiness was her priority, and in my mind THAT Anjali would not just sit down with her hands tied if she perceived any threat towards them. So I'm on cloud 9 literally that you liked her characterisation here!! Thank you, thank you, thank you!!!

Aap humein kyon thankya rahin hain? Likha aapne itna phantastic hai ki hum toh aise hi comment karenge. :p

*blush*blush*grin*blush*blush*

I understand how a writer feels when a reader grasps what they were trying to say but you are such a fantastic writer that you provide ample clues as to get there. Also I know for one that you arent the regular writers on IF who will take out their mann ki bharaas on Anjali and thereby give her a proper characterization...so yeah. :)

Honestly if I blush any harder I think my blood pressure will rise. Not to mention my ego inflating to the size of my room and suffocating me :P But thank you, thank you, thank you! If you were anywhere near me I'd scare the life out of you with a back-breaking hug :P 

Anjali, and for that matter all characters of IPKKND in general, were very well etched out with massive possibilities which were sadly left unexplored and many a times ruthlessly shunned. Glad to see you taking her out of that darkness and exploring some facets of her personality. :)

Yes, I completely, thoroughly agree with you. Anji in particular, in my opinion, was just plain abused as a character both on the show and as a result on the IPK forums and fanfiction. She went through the same ordeal as her brother, maybe even more so on a level because the tragedy happened on her wedding day, the day she probably dreamed about and fantasised, scarring her. She's just as damaged as Arnav, just dealing with it differently. The sad thing is she never got that shot at redeeming herself that Arnav got - and this goes for so many other people, like Mami, Akash - though Payal comes to mind more prominently. Maybe that's why Anji and Payal are two of my favourite side-characters to explore :) 

And I miss writing on IF too but somewhere I think some sort of saturation point (non fiction because of IPKKND ending and nothing else really catching my attention and fiction because of a variery of reasons) seems to have been reached relating to that...lets see now...thanks anyway for your kind words. :)

I can understand what you mean, but I just have to say this - you are one of the very few, out of maybe three or four, writers that I've devoutly followed since picking up fanfiction here, and that's because there's a flair and a genuineness to whatever you write that' s very refreshing and addictive, kind of. Your characters are so well mapped I can relate to them instantly, language so lucid and clear it carries you away, and creativity that leaves me in awe every single time. I know that with the show ending and the plagiarism nonsense and the restrictions a personal blog imposes are all constraints but - you are a very, very talented writer who touches the depths of characters and makes them come alive like they're real, not just puppets doing what you want them to do. Please never give up on writing - it has more heart than the majority of what I've read on Arhi so far. 

The thing you said about Anjali...you are my soul sister! I have argued the same thing so many times with so many people! 

Anjali suffered just like Arnav did and maybe even more and the fact is that she dealt with it differently - probably in a way worse than Arnav who at least vent it out time to time. She kept it all bottled up and let it give rise to insecurities and beliefs etc making her by far more prone to breakdown than Arnav. Also she never got a chance to get out of it using her own strength of character or drawing strengths from others like Arnav did and hence blaming her for being insecure or chipkoo or weak is just stupid because she wasnt given an opportunity to ever properly explore the one within.

It's like listening to myself talking. Those are e-x-a-c-t-l-y my thoughts. Anjali was never given a chance. Khushi managed to save Arnav from himself, but Anji in the show was left broken. That's why I kind of ended up launching a crusade to justify her. I remember early on I used to be really afraid of what might happen to her - Arnav believed the worst of everything and was more likely to see that things weren't as horrible as he preferred to see, to keep himself prepared. He could be taught what 'hope' was. But Anji was the opposite, believing the best in everything, willingly living a perfect but false reality which was bound to break down someday - and to go through the same thing twice over... And yet, she could have been so strong, given the chance. 

And about the last bit...*Blushes a deep red* 

Its people like you who make me rethink this decision of sorts again and again...so not my fault, people! Thank You so much for your kind words. Much humbled. :)

Don't say thank you - you deserve all the appreciation you get and more. I admit that my reasons for urging you to keep going are partly selfish - I just love reading your work that much :P ;) - but I kind of think writing is a part of who you are, and hopefully you'll be able to reconcile with that part when you feel you can :) 

@Bold - I hear ya. 

Anjali was a beautiful complex character who was never given her due.

And about the last part...I am grateful for support like yours and I dont think I can really give up writing...its just that the recent happenings around IF make me wary...anyway, what do you say to the fact that an OS idea is brewing in my mind somewhere... ;) :D

I would say -OMIGOSH, OHMIGOSH!!!, and happy dance like Santa Claus is coming to town and a truckload of ice-cream just broke down outside my house :D :P Party


 


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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 3:49am | IP Logged
^ Hahahahaha! Thats a first that I have heard! 

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 6:07am | IP Logged
welcome back. it was a wonderful update. waiting for the next update

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 8:13am | IP Logged
i have read this FF today in one go ...what a beautiful story .. maybe the way we wanted ipkknd to unfold ...update soon 

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 1:12pm | IP Logged
Just finished reading this beautiful ff. You are an amazing writer.
Its one of the best ff on Arnav's redemption. I especially liked how
Khushi is taking time to trust him, to believe in him. Please continue writing..Smile

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