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Arhi FF|Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| *Complete!* #3 (Page 72)

..mrinalini.. IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 10 February 2013 at 4:20am | IP Logged
You sure have a way with words!!Clap

The way you pen down their feelings..it's a treat to read..to speak the least!!

Waiting for your next update and send you a buddy request so that you can PM me any news of update!!Tongue

Oh..and did I say I love this FF??A little too much??!!Big smile

God bless you!!Smile

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Posted: 10 February 2013 at 7:48am | IP Logged
Very nice update...
Beautifully writtn...
Finally they confessd...

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Posted: 10 February 2013 at 7:54am | IP Logged
amazin part...!

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Posted: 10 February 2013 at 8:07am | IP Logged
Loved it. Fabulous update.
The confession scene was beautifully written.
I am really liking the way shashi is helping anjali maybe not directly but still helping.

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Posted: 10 February 2013 at 8:39am | IP Logged
Arnav and Khushi admitting their feelings was very realistically done and so in character.

Shashi and Anjali part had me wondering at Shashi's motivation andAnjali's perception.


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Posted: 10 February 2013 at 9:11am | IP Logged
Thank you, DE, your update was worth a million times the minutes I waited for it to come.

I have no words to describe how wonderful your update was, I just feel the words I have are but a pathetic echo of my admiration for your writing. I so, so loved your description of the oasis of peace that Anjali found herself in, I was literally transported to that place of tranquility.

 Every metpahor, every image, every similie you have used in this update is just so, so apt in conveying and recreating the emotions of your characters and the situations they find themselves in.
It was perfect piece of writing, what a joy it was to read, thank you once again, DE


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Posted: 10 February 2013 at 9:14am | IP Logged
finallt the words are out and its is also reached the arnav's ears...i m loving this redeemed arnav, he literally worships khushi!!
this is totally an amazing update...you are just awesome!!

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Posted: 10 February 2013 at 9:39am | IP Logged
Nafisa, you have a knack of updating when I'm not in town! 

I loved loved loved this part! You are the queen of detailing and ArHi confession scenes. Really! I have read this part a hundred times by now and each time I enjoy it more. 

'I love you, Arnavji. I love you so, so much.'

From a quintessentially Khushilicious confession to the nervous fumbling to the sure and certain declaration of love, wonderful! And this Arnav is one of my favorites, I adore him. 

Lovely update Nafisa, totally worth the wait!

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