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Arhi FF|Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| *Complete!* #3 (Page 70)

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Posted: 09 February 2013 at 7:30am | IP Logged
Wonderful update!

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Posted: 09 February 2013 at 7:56am | IP Logged
Awww They confessed !

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Posted: 09 February 2013 at 8:25am | IP Logged
the confession though simple was heart-warming...loved it!

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Posted: 09 February 2013 at 8:45am | IP Logged
all the wait was worth it... awesome update

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Posted: 09 February 2013 at 8:49am | IP Logged
Accursed jalebis? DID KHUSHI ACTUALLY THINK THAT? Shocked She definitely loves her Arnavji a lot! LOL

"I swear to Devi Maiyya, I am never going to touch those things again. ROFL
And I'm also going to keep my mouth shut for the rest of my life. ROFL
And when I get home I'm going to hide under the bed. ROFL
And maybe I should permanently change my name to Sanka Devi while I'm at it." ROFL

I doubles with laughter at that part. You showed a flustered Khushi perfectly. It was cute. It was funny. It was...Khushi! Pagal, but cute! I just fell in love with Khushi all over again. (And I'm straight. No wonder Arnav couldn't help falling for Khushi! LOL

The moment I read Anjali's name after Khushi's yes, I was like...scene change? No!!!! She can't do that!!! So I did what I'll call the intelligent thing. I read that part and then skipped over to the last part so that I could enjoy reading about my arhi at ease. Nice naa? Tongue 

But Oh My Good Lord! Anjali's part was so...so wonderful. I can't even begin to describe. I had a sense of assurance grip me - the kind you feel for your dear ones, knowing that they're beginning to overcome their troubles...making peace with life...rediscovering themselves. It's like - sab theek ho jayega. And that thought is, yes, inspiring too. And Shashiji? He did that knowingly? Wow! WOW!! He's a gem of a person. *RESPECT* Yup! He deserves it. 


"They had used words to break each other in the first place.
It only made sense that they used words to replace those dour, dark memories, to heal themselves. Words to reaffirm the promises they had been making to each other, albeit without words, all along." Clap W.O.W!! My favourite lines, definitely. I read it like 5-7 times. 

The Arnav and Khushi part. It was so...SO beautiful. Just the perfect confession from Khushi and the so romantically perfect response from Arnav. I was transported into another world. Yes, I was. I'm not joking. And I didn't pick it up from Anjali. LOL I GENUINELY felt that. Only after I typed it did I realise that you'd said the same for Anjali in the update. And I'll give it to nothing, but the unbelievably brilliant and beautiful way you write. It's easy to find people describe events, scenes, landscapes, physical appearances of characters, their dresses and what not. But to find writers describing emotions and thoughts with such precision and ease...and not only that but also being able to successfully communicate it to a whole bunch of readers you've never know/met, is just so unique. It's mind blowing! It's almost a blessing to me that I found you! I mean it and I say that from the bottom of my heart! Big smile


PS - I hope I made sense. And it didn't appear that I was just rambling. Otherwise I'll be so embarrassed! LOL


Oh God! Thoda zyada lamba ho gayya comment! Hahaha!



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Posted: 09 February 2013 at 8:53am | IP Logged
Awesome uopdate. Paagal & Cute Sanka Devi. Lol. Anjali's part also beautifully discribed.

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Posted: 09 February 2013 at 9:01am | IP Logged
I LOVED IT!!!! I think you already know by now that I'm a fan of your work! I only wish the actual show had taken such a direction! I loved the emotions you portrayed through Arnav's and Khushi's eyes. They love each other so much and they have finally said it to each other!!! *sigh* If only every girl out there found their Arnav! Thanks for the PM :) I can't wait to read more! 

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Posted: 09 February 2013 at 9:37am | IP Logged
beautifully update loved how arnav was holding his breathe pleading for her to repeat and to assure him of what she said and anjali and babuji she needed to be needed she need to know she could take care of her self and some one else loved how she got her moment of clarity and felt peace and the arnav and khushi confession awesome beautifully done thanks for the pm

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