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Arhi FF|Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| *Complete!* #3 (Page 59)

rati123 Goldie
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Posted: 05 December 2012 at 1:51am | IP Logged
Beautiful update as ususal. You are an amazing writer. PLEASE UPDATE SOON .

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Posted: 05 December 2012 at 11:12am | IP Logged
plzzz update 

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Posted: 06 December 2012 at 4:56am | IP Logged
*jumps with excitement*

Well Ive been doing that lietrally over the past few updates of MDJND !Big smile
And the emo above, is no match to how wide Ive been smiling all along !

I'll go to the most exciting part the last OK !
So the relationship you've built between Anjali and Shashi !
I wish, they'd done it in the show tooo ! He notices so many similarities between Khushi and Anjali, and he is so caring ! He definitely was a great father, could have been shown so much better on the show, but Im so glad you made up for it !

And Anjalim the emotions she feels, the way she feels that she has never had the chance to look after, but always being looked upon ! That desparation in her to be given just one chance to prove herself ! And Shashi does trust her, give her that chance ! And Im excitedly waiting for the next part ! And Nafi, I loved the way you so easily switched the moods between ArHi and Anjali ! Usually I hate it when Anjali comes in between, but this time, I didnt mind a bit !

And then !
The biggest thing of all !
Khushi finallly said I love you to Arnav ! Well not as directly as he had, butr she in her own Khushi way called him a Jalebi, and Im corry, but I couldnt help grinning over there at all ! IU was blushing, my cheeks were so hot, and I was so flustered up over there ! Haiii ! That was the sweetest sugary confession I would have ever read ! And so *crushes you tight in a hug* I love you for that !

And Arnav, taking it all in, so concerned ! Sure he is lucky ! And oh I cant get over the expressions you gave when Khushi tells him she loves him ! Haiii ! That was such a lovely scene !

Khushi, Oh Khushi meri jaan ! (OK , that was crazy, but that's how I feel after reading you update)
The emotions she goes through, the amount of happiness she feels, its almost like the whole world is at her feet ! And believe me , when you described her so happy, I felt so glad from within, almost as though she;s been served justice for all the wrong that life seemed to give her, cause as much as I try, Im a feminist ! (why do I get carried away ?)

And I tell you, you';re mean, but sweetly so ! It took me 3 days to write god knows whatever Ive written ! And please forgive me, cause I can never do justice to your updates Nafisa ! You just blow me away into ArHi dreamland everytime !Big smile And I so love you for that *another crushing hug*

*dances* Khushi called Arnav a jalebiBig smile
I Love you !

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Kishmish IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 07 December 2012 at 6:14am | IP Logged
Have just started reading ...
please bear with me ...
will comment when I finish ...
Big smile

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leanne_1983 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 10 December 2012 at 12:17pm | IP Logged
OMG, You are an AMAZING writer. Your fic was suggested as a must read by a forum member esmeralda111 in her post 'My favourite writers and their notable work on IF'. I am so glad I came across that post. Cause I got to read this AMAZING story. You have done a fantastic job so far. Keep up the good work. Hope you update soon.

Edited by leanne_1983 - 10 December 2012 at 12:21pm

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Posted: 11 December 2012 at 5:31am | IP Logged
Please please please update.

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Posted: 15 December 2012 at 8:17pm | IP Logged
Please please please please update!

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Posted: 15 December 2012 at 9:09pm | IP Logged
Fabulous update...totally loved the confession by Khushi SmileSmile She was fretting over how to say it and then blurted it out in defending jalebis...that was tooo cute! N Arnav's reaction - priceless!
Their entire argument over jalebis was adorable!

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