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Arhi FF|Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| *Complete!* #3 (Page 57)

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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 9:20pm | IP Logged
Ur writing iss lik a is lik a work of art a painting or a sculptire beautifulll
My hearts going dhak dhak
Lov d chapter..

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Posted: 19 November 2012 at 7:39am | IP Logged
Khushi comparing Arnav to a jalebi was just wow! Twisted and crisp and mushy.A Wonderful updateThumbs Up

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Posted: 19 November 2012 at 5:47pm | IP Logged

This part was BRILLIANT!!

Wow! the way you were describing Shashi and Anjali's emotions were too good. The comparison between the Khushi who came to Shashi as a young child to what Anjali is going through now was a very well written one!
Arnav and Khushi are awesomely depicted as well! She said she loves him!!!
 
Please continue soon! Keep up the great work!!
 

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Posted: 19 November 2012 at 9:35pm | IP Logged
Beautiful update. 

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Posted: 19 November 2012 at 9:55pm | IP Logged
love your description of inner thoughts...and 'arnav and jelabi' part was lovely!

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Posted: 20 November 2012 at 4:53am | IP Logged
welcome back Hug
awesome part as always.
loved arhi's moments.
khushi getting restless and unable to confess her love
and her comparison of jalebi with arnav was funny.
but she is right about the comparison.
loopy, crisp outside soft inside.
and she loves both arnav and jalebi's.
really loved anjali and shashi gupta's POV.
waiting for the truth to come out.
hope anjali confides to shashi.
thanks for the pm.
update soon.

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Posted: 20 November 2012 at 11:13am | IP Logged
An absolutely lovely chapter - and of course she should compare him to Jalebis - I was waiting for the moment that she would compare her love for jalebis to her love for him and you did not disappoint.
I wish your Anjali courage - strength and courage - she has both, she just has to believe in what she has.

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Absolutely lovely update.

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