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Arhi FF|Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| *Complete!* #3 (Page 54)

revathysugathan Senior Member
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Posted: 16 November 2012 at 11:28am | IP Logged
Loved it Smile The tension in the car, their love and how much Arnav understands Khushi - perfectly portrayed Smile

And the way you described how Anjali sees herself was perfect too. Hope Bauji can help her.

All in all, worth the wait Clap

Plz update the next part soon dear and thanks for the PM Heart

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Posted: 16 November 2012 at 11:48am | IP Logged
love this update! 

Khushi comparing Arnav to jalebis and his reaction to that was
priceless... and she told him she loves him while continuing her rant...Big smile

loved the bit about Anjali and Sashi...

waiting for the next update!

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Posted: 16 November 2012 at 2:30pm | IP Logged
Sigh! That was beautiful!
I srsly don't know where do I start from...
Arhi were amazing...khushi's restlessness nervousness so beautifully explained that wen she actually said it I read the thing about 3,4 times :p
And I was practically having butterflies in my stomach with expectations...
With all the happenings currently in their life trust arhi to actually debate on jalebis...! :p
Anjali and shashi...completely outstanding!
The next chapter seems interesting for both the parts of the story...
Can't wait plz try to make it quick! Thankyou!;)
Great update!
Loved it! Thanks for the pm:)

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Posted: 16 November 2012 at 3:27pm | IP Logged
HeartHeartHeart Great update. Please write a looong romantic chapter nextEmbarrassed Thanks for the PM.

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Posted: 16 November 2012 at 3:59pm | IP Logged
great update loved her comparing him to jalebis and then telling him that she loved him

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Posted: 16 November 2012 at 4:26pm | IP Logged
Tongue  Thank you for the wonderful update. Clap

Sorry got to run, must make dinner.  Will share more thoughts next time.


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Posted: 16 November 2012 at 5:33pm | IP Logged
fantastic update
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 16 November 2012 at 10:16pm | IP Logged
Amazingly sweet update
I liked khushi's confused confession 

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