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Arhi FF|Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| *Complete!* #3 (Page 44)

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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 8:53pm | IP Logged
Hello... Have i ever told you that you are the master of details. Your writing is so vivid. I can actually picture it all in my head as i read it.
About todays update, well what is there to say, for lack of a better word, beautiful. Loved it. Looking forward to how you will make khushi say those magical 3 words.
Keep the good work. Untill the next update...Love.

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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 9:37pm | IP Logged
if this doesn't surpass people's expectations... screw them...

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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 9:59pm | IP Logged
Beautiful Chapter Clap
Cant describe in words...Loved it to the bits..Heart
Thanks for the pm.

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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 10:24pm | IP Logged
I have absolutely no words left to say this was just so amazingly written
The significance of pearls in their life Day Dreaming and they kissed I mean they really kissed I feel as if i hv imagined it the confession the love he showed to khushi was beautifully written
And very well portrayal of emotions

Amazing update

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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 10:50pm | IP Logged
I was not expecting such an early update,but believe me it's a surprise and a pleasant one.So,Arnav and Khushi after all the hurdles which they themselves put in their way are finally engaged.The way you wrote this chapter is praisewothy. I specially liked the word "Surreal" used by you.I am in love with this word, in fact I feel this word perfectly rendered dream like quality to the magical kiss shared by the dream-couple.

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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 10:53pm | IP Logged
I just read both the updates and oh boy, they're brilliant.
the last chapter being the more captivating one, more special, but both were equally important. I loved how you incorporated khushis basic ideals, her thoughts in that simple statement about the ring being expensive. and I loved how you incorporated the essence of khushis existence and their past in the significance of the ring
and they kissed, thankyou. still a long way to go, all the best

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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 11:27pm | IP Logged
i have neva read anythin so beautiful !!!!!!
the pearl connection...tht left me spellbound !!!!!!!!!
loved the update !!!!!!
Arshi are so pure...so ethreal !!!!!

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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 11:56pm | IP Logged
good update...Smile

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