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Arhi FF|Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| *Complete!* #3 (Page 43)

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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 4:27pm | IP Logged
wow fantastic update the emotions beautiful
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 6:54pm | IP Logged
I am so happy u updated! I was waiting for them to kiss! But I really liked the way it came about. I glad that despite everything, Kushi is ready to move on. Can't wait for the Anjali /babuji convo! Great job!

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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 7:14pm | IP Logged
ClapClapthanks...superbClapClap

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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 7:17pm | IP Logged
What an update...the emotions were expressed so beautifully...I adored this chapter...I can't wait to read more! Thansk for the PM!

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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 7:21pm | IP Logged
Lovely chapters.. Khushi has accepted him.. Loved how she kept telling him to let go of the past.. She is really a person with a golden heart.. I guess Arnav has told her everything abt how bad he was with her.. Its time to start afresh.. She has accepted the ring.. Looking forward to the coming chapters..

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Arnav sighed. 'They symbolise faith...charity...innocence...harmony...perfection...purity...in other words,' his hand cupped her chin, and he leaned forward enough to nudge his nose with hers, 'they symbolise you.'

As he heard her soft, surprised gasp, he backed away an inch, trying to convey his seriousness, his honesty through his eyes before he began speaking again, 'And that night...when we first might...I ripped that dori on your dress...the dori made of pearls...I ripped apart everything that was you, then and ever since...I fouled up your purity, your innocence, your perfection, because of my own inability to believe that something so pure, so innocent, so perfect...could actually exist..



awesome update loved it him lashing out at him self was so perfect the emotions were well written and described you could fell his self loathing and his khushi loved how she kept telling him to let go of the past and for them to move on awesome update beautifully thanks for the pm
 

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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 8:39pm | IP Logged
omg that was bloody awsuuum...wow loved it very much dear...gosh why could not this be the story...i love arnav in this ff...sooo beautiful and so was the kisss...hae...loved it very much n thnx 4da pm dear...

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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 8:52pm | IP Logged
hello... Have i ever told you that you are the master of details. Your writing is so vivid. I can actually picture it all in my head as i read it.
About todays update, well what is there to say, for lack of a better word, beautidul. Loved it. Looking forward to how you will make khushi say those magical 3 words.
Keep the good work. Untill the next update... Love.

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