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Arhi FF|Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| *Complete!* #3 (Page 39)

Japonica IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 10:41am | IP Logged
I am speechless, DE. These latest updates are so, so moving and beautiful.

They are exactly what I had wanted from the show but then there was never chance of getting that, was there? Simply because the show may have created the characters, but it never understood  or even wanted to know the beings it had created .

How then could the cvs even begin to fathom either the depths of the hurt felt or of the remorse suffered for having caused it!!

What a beautiful gesture the ring was. How  much thought and love went into it and how beautifully it was recieved!


Thanks you Nafisa for this most beautifully written story of two such beautiful people.

And thank you giving Anjali such dignity and strength in her pain. Again so unlike the caricature we've had to suffer in the show.

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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 10:45am | IP Logged
You are just fantastic!!!

I mean you actually made pearls symbolize  Khushi !!! It was just 

marvelous and each and every symbol that you wrote was just 

awesome.

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dmg123 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 10:50am | IP Logged
AWESOME!!!!
This part was so so so brilliant...the way Arnav was talking to her and their first kiss!...it was so sweet.
The way you were writing about their emotions is so real...and I always wonder, "how do you do it?" And I always answer saying, "I don't know how but I am so happy that I am able to read such a wonderful story!"
 
I cannot wait to see the conversation between Anjali and Shashi, and I really wonder how Khushi will say "I love you"!
 
Keep up the great work!

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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 10:57am | IP Logged

I'm really sorry, I'm reading a few stories with similar plots so I'm a little confused, Shashi Gupta in this story can speak? Well that's kinda great. He's a much better person for Anjali to confide in than Khushi, makes Khushi's life easy. Though I doubt she trusts him enough to confide in him. But he's a definitely a better choice when it comes to the matters of Shyam.

Also, thank god they kissed already! long overdue!! ((No, i'm not saying it wasn't timed well, I'm re-emphasising I'm a perv when it comes to Arshi))



Loved the chapter sweetheart!



~sri


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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 10:57am | IP Logged
the hug, Arnav and Khushi's emotions and the turmoil going on in 
Anjali's mind... awesome1Smile

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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 11:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by damonzlady

the hug, Arnav and Khushi's emotions and the turmoil going on in 
Anjali's mind... awesome1Smile

Hi! I just wanna kiss your avi, maybe use some tongue while i'm at it *winks*

~sri
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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 11:04am | IP Logged
i had goosebumps on my arms when i read chapter 43. Extremely soulful. Perfect!

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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 11:07am | IP Logged
loved it!

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