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Arhi FF|Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| *Complete!* #3 (Page 36)

arushi05 Goldie
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Posted: 03 October 2012 at 7:40pm | IP Logged
Awesome update.

You described every emotion, every scene so well.

The way you described arnav's happiness on realising that khushi was hugging him for the first time was too good.

So anjali wants to disclose her secret to khushi. Why do i think that she may not be pregnant?

Thanks for the pm

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Jyo.Arshi.IPK IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 03 October 2012 at 9:16pm | IP Logged
beautiful !!!! ClapClap

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devsum IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 03 October 2012 at 10:03pm | IP Logged
Awesome update.. loved them  both  actually all three.Thanks for the pm.

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cpervaiz Goldie
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Posted: 03 October 2012 at 10:04pm | IP Logged
to be honest, the last part was a cutie and also the part when she impulsively hugged him, i'm not criticizing or maybe i am, but it's friendly one that sometimes it's gets really hard to find the story line and what's going on in middle of all the jumbled emotion from all-over, i mean there's just too much detailing about random things or too many emotions at the same time and i get lost what was going.
pplz don't take this in a bad way, i do love your story
can't wait to read more
thanx for the pm:)

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Posted: 03 October 2012 at 10:21pm | IP Logged
I really love their love and how they are getting closer
Also I like how Anjali trusts Khushi a lot
Thanks for the pm

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shagun05 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 12:05am | IP Logged
This was awesome!!!

loved it and please dont call it Rubbishy coz it was just beautiful!!! Smile

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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 12:13am | IP Logged
Awesome update Clap
Thanks for the pm..

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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 12:14am | IP Logged
fabulous dear:)

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