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Arhi FF|Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| *Complete!* #3 (Page 33)

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Posted: 03 October 2012 at 3:47pm | IP Logged
Loved it! Anji seeking Khushi 's help for Karan?

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Posted: 03 October 2012 at 4:36pm | IP Logged
fantastic update
loved it
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 03 October 2012 at 5:11pm | IP Logged
brilliant, loved it, cant wait for next part, please update soon, thanx for the pm

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Posted: 03 October 2012 at 5:36pm | IP Logged

She objected because the ring was expensive.

And how could he blame her?

After having cheapened her existence time and time again, after taunting her mercilessly when she had first become engaged, to someone else, someone that was not him, taunting her faceless fianc's faceless status...after demeaning her character, after belittling everything she stood for, defacing what he called her false morals, labelling her a gold-digger...

How could he blame her? How could he blame her if she flinched away whenever it came to things she had, perhaps subconsciously, come to see as being outside her league, simply because he, from the first moment he had met her, had not forsaken any opportunity to hammer in that fact to her.

That he, and everything he stood for, was outside her league.




intense amazing emotional beautifully you have a way with words loved the update anjali realizing she needed khushi that she has come to not being able to do without her and is going to tell her about snake love her trust on khushi and arnav realizing even do khushi loves him subconsciously all the insults he has told her it has made her not accepting his present of love and  how it strucked him awesome update thanks for the pm 



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Posted: 03 October 2012 at 5:37pm | IP Logged
Awesome!!!
i liked how you showed Khushi, Arnav and Anjali's POV.
Anjali is trusting Khushi...this bond that you have created between them is very nice!
The hug was so sweet!
 
You wrote a very brilliant part!! Keep up the good work
 
 

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Posted: 03 October 2012 at 6:59pm | IP Logged
Such a powerful update! The bond Anjali and Khushi share is pure beauty...and now Anjali has an ally in Khushi...and who can blame Khushi for thinking the ring was expensive...Loved the update!! Thanks for the PM!!

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Posted: 03 October 2012 at 7:40pm | IP Logged
Awesome update.

You described every emotion, every scene so well.

The way you described arnav's happiness on realising that khushi was hugging him for the first time was too good.

So anjali wants to disclose her secret to khushi. Why do i think that she may not be pregnant?

Thanks for the pm

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Posted: 03 October 2012 at 9:16pm | IP Logged
beautiful !!!! ClapClap

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