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Arhi FF|Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| *Complete!* #3 (Page 138)

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Posted: 03 January 2014 at 11:12am | IP Logged
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Unresed on page 132. Finally.LOL

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Posted: 04 January 2014 at 12:07am | IP Logged
Aaawww whattt a lovely Update...I loved the Jalebi n Dragonfly part...Thought I enjoyed the update but now I think That I should re-read last few chapters to undrstand the story fully...
I think Anjali has got enough proofs to file a case against Shyam n thats why she has gone to Police station...I hop I m right in my guess n Not mixing diferent storylines...:)
Khushi's promise will Keep Arnav standing his ground firmly in this battle...
Thannkkkuu soo much for pm Nafeesa...Update soon...
After a long time u have updated n We want more updates of MDJND...

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Happy new year
update was too good
continue soon

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Chapter 47

*thunderous applause* Clap

Bore us to tears?? *eyes wide open* You've got to be kidding me! My attention didn't waver; not even for a few seconds. It was excellent!!

I remember you telling us, probably after Chapter 46 that the romance would get soon get serious next. What I'm really proud of is that you've included this chapter that stands as a milestone in their relationship, which a lot of authors would not have managed to do. Even if they did, the impact could nowhere have been as potent as yours.

How shall I tell you which parts I loved when I loved every bit? I loved how you created a perfect picture of a nervous Khushi - the stammering, the blushing, the lip-chewing and then those that we get from Arnav's perspective : "Arnav was ready to bet his bank balance that Khushi must have slapped her palm into her forehead at some point as she progressed from talking to him to talking to herself, her fluster causing her to fiddle with the edge of her pale-coloured dupatta or the hem of the kurta she customarily donned for bed, blushing a furious crimson -"  With all due respect to the seriousness of the situation, I couldn't help but laugh at that LOL Wink

But what was even better, was showing a stressed and confused (my choice of words understate his predicament) Arnav. You kept me at the edge of my seat and made Arnav's plight reach a crescendo so well that I almost believed that everything would fall apart, only to bring in Khushi with her 'Laad Governor' dialogue, diffusing the situation in a second with ease and elegance. I think, at that moment, I fell in love with your writing and you a little more (if that was even possible).

Arnav has been bearing the responsibilities of his entire family for too long and I'm super happy that Khushi is there now, to support and help him. He needs it. They need it.

Phenomenal chapter! Probably one of my favourites so far! Big smile


PS - I'm getting to the next chapter soon. Don't kill me. Please? :P



Edited by avantika_2012 - 04 January 2014 at 7:21am

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Chapter 48

We're reaching the end? Nooo! :/  

I LOVED the first part. They share such a beautiful relationship and you pen down every moment with perfection! 

It's kind of going to be anti-climatic when Arnav and Khushi will find out that Anjali is already aware of the entire truth. They were breaking their head over nothing. Well, almost nothing! :P It's good that they're going to confront Anjali, coz that will really help everyone. Although, I do wonder what to make of Shyam's situation; I can't even recall if Anjali confronted him. She didn't, right?

I could quote a lot more as my favourite lines, but these are just so accurate, clear and concise, that I'm in awe of your writing ability (yet again Wink )
"But that was always the case- win or lose, the scattering of wounds and bruises over battle-weary soldiers were never different; the victorious and the defeated could never be told apart. Hurt and pain and fear and destruction were inevitable, and what was frightening was the fact that battles were but chapters in books- one page in a war made up of hundreds that might tip the fortune of everyone involved.
Winners could become losers in the wink of an eye.
And though they had won a battle yesterday- the battle they had been fighting ever since they had met one another, against each other and against themselves- the war was yet to end."


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Posted: 04 January 2014 at 7:58am | IP Logged
I want another update for MDJND. Please? Or am I being unreasonable? :s

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Posted: 04 January 2014 at 8:37am | IP Logged
Beautiful update.. She telling him that she will always be with him.. Anjali is falling in some type of trap.Pinch What is that snake upto now? Pinch

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