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Arhi FF|Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| *Complete!* #3 (Page 136)

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Posted: 02 January 2014 at 3:43am | IP Logged
Love the fact that Khushi is going to stand by her man always - come what may.

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RainyDays Senior Member
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Posted: 02 January 2014 at 4:28am | IP Logged
YAY !
Its so good to read MDJND after such a long time !!
Such a lovely Update ! :D
Amazing way in which they cemented their trust in each other and the life long relationship that they have paved for themselves... :)
I know that Shyam is upto no good , but he is stopped before whatever he has planned ...
Waiting to read about Arnav-Khushi's talk with Anjali . And the shock they will go through when they will get to know that she already knows of Shyam's dealings ...

I love the way the conversation between Arnav and Khushi changed from emotional to all teasing .. :)

Happy New Year !

I want the update of both the stories but seeing that its New Year , I would ask for an update of NYR first !

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Arshix144 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 02 January 2014 at 4:55am | IP Logged
Nafisa welcome back, Happy New Year and thank you so much for updating my absolute favourite work of fiction on Arnav's redemption.

What can I say, your writing is poetry and I am always in Awe! You have a way with words, you blend them into the story with so much depth, meaning and feeling that one can't help but be completely engrossed and my state was no different. As always I don't think any amount of words will be enough to do justice to your beautiful writing. 

Arnav and Khushi's interaction was pure magic, the way she sensed his fatigue and crumbled state was brilliance N! Khushi was there to reach out to him, to assure him that she is right there with them every step of the way and it worked because he came out of his state and started teasing his angelic wife. You made me go through various emotions just in that interaction alone, if one minute I was feeling sad for them, the next I was smiling and finally you left me in awe again. Your understanding of the complex nature of relationships and that two Arnav and Khushi's relationship is mind boggling. The way you showcase their fears, their own little insecurities as a result of the turbulences in their lives is perfection. The amazing part is that they can sense how the other could be feeling. They will indeed need to be tactful about everything they do going forward. 

And you ended the chapter with a mystery, just what did Anjali get up to? The way you orchestrated the final scene is nothing short of a thrilling mystery that one witnesses in the movies. I can hardly wait to see what transpires next! Love your work!

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Posted: 02 January 2014 at 5:04am | IP Logged
Aaahhh!!!yay!!:D
(Thats squealing like a fan girl because thats what i srsly want to do right now :P)
You updated!:D
Ok coming to the update...beautiful!
Arnav and khushi's relationship has become just so beautiful! The teasing and caring its just so adorable!
But anjali has me worried! Where is she?? :/

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Posted: 02 January 2014 at 5:40am | IP Logged
i wonder what more twists r left

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shutter IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 02 January 2014 at 6:57am | IP Logged

Huh.. Finally u decided and got the time to update this fic... This is an awesome FF.. The first time I read it, I got lost in the narrative... It was that captivating!!!!!!

Will come back with comments as soon as I can finish reading this new 
update...

Wish u a very very happy new year!!!!! Enjoy and have a great year...

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Posted: 02 January 2014 at 8:25am | IP Logged
good...Smile

Edited by Surya.Ravi - 02 January 2014 at 8:24am

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Posted: 02 January 2014 at 10:56am | IP Logged
Nice update. Happy New Year!

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