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Arhi FF|Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| *Complete!* #3 (Page 130)

Maleina34 Senior Member
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Posted: 24 November 2013 at 1:49am | IP Logged
This story is so amazing.  I hope you continue it.  The way you write about the psyche of the different characters make them feel alive.  Kushi journey to forgiveness is so real and relatable.  I hope we can read from you soon

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Posted: 29 November 2013 at 5:19am | IP Logged
Waiting for the next update..

Please do continue soon..!!

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Posted: 29 November 2013 at 8:18pm | IP Logged
Oh my god!!! Absolutely out of the world story this is!

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Posted: 30 November 2013 at 1:23pm | IP Logged
I am in total awe of the way u weave words into a sentence and then a intricate paragraph and then in to an intensely woven chapter!! I still am processing all that I have read in this story which is mind blowing by the way, the sheer breaking down of every single detail of which the heart ,the mind , the body and the soul feel ,react ,think and act...I am absolutely in love with the way Arnav and Khushi get emotionally,psychologically,physically ,mentally  involved ,attracted , combined ,figured and finally accepted each other,irrevocably ...
Your writing is so profound and clear at the same time..along with being  soul stirring...have never ever read anything so well dissected and thought out to the tiniest detail  of
F their thought process. 


The writers of ipk should have seen your work and took a few scenes:) would have loved to see your story in the series..especially the remorse and redemption part.. It's that good:)
Please do continue this and I feel u r made to write!! I congratulate you for this absolutely beautiful work and wish u all the best!

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Posted: 16 December 2013 at 2:06pm | IP Logged
I totally love this FF and you know what's the best part the concentration is always on Arshi and I really loved Khushi's confession and their late night phone convo was great too...Khushi exercising her right and Arnav being happy about it!!! I can't believe she compared him to jalebi!!! I also like the fact that Khushi took her own time before forgiving Arnav...It was really nice to read how Arnav's redemption and Khushi's forgiveness evolved at its own pace.

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Posted: 19 December 2013 at 11:46pm | IP Logged
Wonderful chapters.. Arnav just cudnt believe that she confessed she loves him.. Day Dreaming And then she telling him how she will always stand with him in everything.. Just so heart warming... Day Dreaming

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Posted: 24 December 2013 at 11:38pm | IP Logged
when r u going to update

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Posted: 01 January 2014 at 5:36am | IP Logged
Awesome

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