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Arhi FF|Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| *Complete!* #3 (Page 113)

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Posted: 28 May 2013 at 11:08am | IP Logged
hurray...waiting...

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cocoamob Senior Member
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Posted: 29 May 2013 at 4:23pm | IP Logged
That is an amazing story! You have put so much thought into Arnav and Khushi's feelings that the characters come alive and I really enjoyed reading it. It is perfect to curl up on the sofa and read without any breaks on a rainy day and that is what I did. Needless to say we have had a few rainy days here.

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Posted: 30 May 2013 at 9:55am | IP Logged
Hey...Update soon na ?????Day Dreaming

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Posted: 31 May 2013 at 3:00pm | IP Logged
You have done a fantastic job with this FFClapStar!! I am in complete awe of your outstanding talent! I look forward to the next update. Please if possible PM me when you update! Looking forward to many more beautiful chapters! Smile

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Posted: 07 June 2013 at 11:36pm | IP Logged
i was off the radar for a while and hence the late comment; also im afraid bc u update so late that i have to go back and re-read the last chapter. khair
lovely and to the point as always. wished i could read more from u

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Posted: 09 June 2013 at 10:48am | IP Logged
i am completely in awe of your writing talent.  incredible.  I f we actually had the more talented writers like yourself, working on the IPK script, the series would have been incredible throughout.

but i digress.  this was great, i loved the role reversal.  much needed.  he has been Atlas for a while.

i will be honest and admit that anjali was one of my least favorite characters on the show.  my reasons are varied.  one, i find it almost impossible to believe that a woman who almost obsessed over her Shyamji would be so blind to the patterns of his life and his absences.  Then the fact that a life experience namely her traumatic past that everyone around her used as a learning experience she chose to rely on a crutch, namely her obsession with poojas.  Yet when the truth of shyam was exposed she did not turn to her faith to make sense of the chaos.  so in my mind even the expression of piety she professed was a front.  I found little that was genuine about her.  her "love" for her husband her love for her unborn child, her love for her brother, her piety.  everything.  she turned her back on her brother and her faith so then it begs the question, what is sacred in this woman's life?  the answer i come up with is ...?  literally nothing.  

i know in your story, anjali is aware of the truth and i hope that she turns that knowledge into a stepping stone and becomes what i can respect, a strong woman.  after all failures are failures only if we let them be.  if we learn from our failures, they become stepping stones to success

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Posted: 14 June 2013 at 7:00pm | IP Logged
loved the update and the role reversal of Arnav and khushi
this kind of changed their relationship's dynamics and put them for each other
can't wait to read more
thanks for the pm:) and sorry for the late comments

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Posted: 15 June 2013 at 10:15pm | IP Logged
I really like re-reading this story. I keep coming back to it.

Its so emotional yet I can the two of them growing and trusting each other. 

And Anjali being so more than just the damsel. Bril! :D

OH! AND I LOVE YOUR PHOTO. "SHERLOCKED". *DROOL*
I hope you won't wait till the next episode of 'Sherlock' to write more!
Please don't pull a Moffat!

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