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Arhi FF|Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| *Complete!* #3 (Page 113)

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Posted: 21 May 2013 at 4:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by anonyasr

Great conversation between A and K. Lovely chapter.

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :) 

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Posted: 21 May 2013 at 4:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ruby-red

a very emotional update, loved it, loved the conversation between them, loved the way khushi was supporting arnav, reasuring him that he is not alone, she is with him all the way, brilliant.

Thank you so much for reading and commenting! I'm glad you liked it :) 
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Posted: 21 May 2013 at 4:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sindu1991

It was such a great update! Wonderfully written as always. I like the way you are slowly showing the strength and the bonding in Arnav and khushi's relationship. I liked the part where Khushi explains to Arnav the complexities of his guilty feeling. Great job. 

Thank you! Especially happy you liked the progression and pacing of their relationship...and very glad you enjoyed Khushi and Arnav's heart-to-heart :) Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts! 
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Posted: 21 May 2013 at 4:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Arjuhisis

fabulous update nafisa
not upto the mark??????????? no way - it surpassed the excellent mark
well done dear

Aw thank you! That's extremely sweet of you to say *blush* 

I'm glad you enjoyed the update- thank you for reading!
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Posted: 21 May 2013 at 4:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jtammareddy

Awesome update. One single lie by anjali about Shyam's phone call has sent things spiraling . Khushi and Arnav relationship is changing in many dimensions. They can understand each other by one single word what other is trying to do. Arnav has been her pillar for a while now. Now it's khushi's turn.

Thanks for the pm.

I'm so glad you've caught the fact that Anjali's lie was the catalyst to getting things moving - hope you'll enjoy the sequence of events from here on too! Also very happy you approve of the changing dynamics of their relationship, and the fact that it's not just Khushi relying on Arnav, but vice-versa too :) Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts! 
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Posted: 21 May 2013 at 4:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by desisoaps05

oh my goosshhh. Definitely waited forever for that update, and choked up reading those words right along with Khushi :')Clap

Thank you :D I'm glad you enjoyed it!! :) 
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Posted: 21 May 2013 at 4:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Raila1014

Here I am tired after a long Mother's Day, in bed with the iPad after turning down my hubby's request to  watch Gamesof Thrones that I simply adore and what do I see?  An update of my favorite FF!   Sleep be gone and I had to read it this even with your warning about the length. 

Oh my...you have no IDEA how much that means to me!! I am absolutely in love with Game of Thrones too, and the fact that you'd give it a miss and yet read this...that just touched my heart and I am so, so very happy, I just don't know how to thank you enough! 

 I love it.  Arnav's torture about Shyam and having to choose, to avenge his wife was as usual beautifully penned.  Lots of words but they were needed to describe what he was going through.  And their conversation, uff you are too good at this.  I could picture this so vividly because of how you took the time to set it up.  This is the talk they should have had after the abduction not when Anjali lost her baby in the show.  I love how she reminded him of their wedding vows and how he does not have to fight this all by himself as she will be there with him.

I can't thank you enough for your kind words - this chapter was a crucial one, because of not only the role-reversal but the underlying conflict Arnav was sort of destined to face from the beginning of the show, in choosing between his wife and his sister. I was really nervous about this chapter because of all these complexities...but your feedback has greatly reassured me and I'm just so glad you liked it and enjoyed the different aspects!! Thank you so much for reading and for sharing your thoughts! It means a lot to me :) 

I don't get PM from you, I stalk as I love this story.  It will make it easier if I get PM.

I've added you to my buddy list and promise to PM you all updates - I hope they won't disappoint :) thank you again! 
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Posted: 21 May 2013 at 4:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by archa2810

They have come out quite strong

Yup :) Thank you for reading! 

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