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Arhi FF|Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| *Complete!* #3 (Page 107)

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Posted: 13 May 2013 at 5:44pm | IP Logged
Such a beautiful chapter. I loved every bit of their conversation. lovely. Cant wait for the anti-climax in the next episode. Imagine their surprise when they realize Anjali knew all along. Or maybe she'll pretend ignorance for their benefit? But she's the only one with proof. Now I'm as confused as poor Arnie.

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Posted: 13 May 2013 at 8:52pm | IP Logged
Beautifully written...loved every bit of it. Please keep the updates comingSmile

Thanks for the PM.

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Posted: 14 May 2013 at 12:42am | IP Logged
nice updt


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Posted: 14 May 2013 at 7:21am | IP Logged
Thanks so much for the PM. I loved this update too. I think that is a given - for any of your updates on this fascinating story.

"It's about time – about time you stopped trying to bear up the whole universe, Arnavji. This load is not yours alone to carry – it's mine too, and it's Di's and it's everyone's whom you love and who love you too." - This has resonated so much with me. I always thought Arnav should let some of his family members grow up and not protect them too much.

Also, the thoughts that were triggered when she called him Laad Governor again, brought a smile and a blush to my face :)

As for the role-reversal, I am really excited about it. It is time there was some equal footing in the relationship even though I should admit I love the dominant personality in ASR. Hope he will continue to dominate but in a positive way.

Cant wait for the next update.. and oh- I felt bad when you said you wrote the update on breaks between 2 jobs on top of everything else. Here we are - always bothering you for updates and we forget that life takes priority. Update when you can.. will wait patiently.

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Posted: 14 May 2013 at 7:40am | IP Logged
yayayayayay!!!! you wrote my favouritest FF again...

ok now that i have exulted in that, let me get to the update itself.

amazing!! love the way khushi has taken over the role of a companion and asserted her rights as wife to arnav.

and love the conversation the two have had.


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Posted: 14 May 2013 at 9:23am | IP Logged
Discovered this ff this morning and finished reading all the updates by evening. There are many things about this ff that has stunned me. First of all, the style of writing. When i cried for arnav, laughed with Khushi, blushed when arnav teased Khushi, laughed out when Akash sulked, cringed thinking of Shyam from arnav and Khushi's pov, I realised how powerful your writing is. The second thing was that the famous 'because I love you dammit' came later in the show and first in your ff. then, the way you have incorporated epic scene like dhadkanen ek ho jaate hain at very important place. But what blew me away was the honesty and sincerity with which arnav's redemption was portrayed. Every word that depicted his turmoil, his guilt, his self unforgiving ness sliced through my heart as if I were arnav and I were going through the torture. Above all, I felt a sense of completeness, which I never got to see in the show. I am glad that I discovered another amazing writer on this forum.

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Posted: 14 May 2013 at 9:43am | IP Logged
Loved the chapter! An so glad it was extra one! Can't wait for the talk they have with Anjali! Hope they actually get to and nothing goes wrong! Can't wait for the next update !!

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Posted: 14 May 2013 at 10:29pm | IP Logged
You're absolutely right you did incorporate a lot in this chapter, and I'm really grateful to you.  You in your 15! pages not only developed our characters relationship further, but you gave us more insight into Shyam's desperation and the fear that it creates amongst our characters.  While I loathe this character, he's so deliciously evil that you can't help want to see what he does next, but also want to see hour our protagonists get the best of him.  

On another note, I liked how you had Arnav talk to Khushi and reveal his feelings and how much it relieves that stress he's feeling and how Khushi reiterated that she is indeed his partner.  

Such a great chapter!

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