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Arhi FF|Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| *Complete!* #3 (Page 104)

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Posted: 12 May 2013 at 10:54pm | IP Logged
This was a really awesome update .. very well written

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Posted: 12 May 2013 at 10:59pm | IP Logged
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I have my exam tomorrow and I've already read this update thrice. That should tell you how addicted I am to this story!Tongue

This update just went to prove that Arnav and Khushi are soulmates. They make me believe in telepathy!Shocked

He is worried sick and restless and she calls him exactly at the right  time !  what do I call this? They are so attuned to each other.

The way she intuitively realized that Arnav is hiding something from her was amazing. She is so very perceptive of every single minute actions and mannerisms of  her husband. But the highlight of this chapter was Arnav's decision to not hold back anything from Khushi.

I don't mean to say that wanting to protect your loved one from all the difficulties is a bad thing. But If one person becomes the protector , shouldering all the problems and worries all by oneself then it gives one's partner an unequal footing in the marriage.

I always felt that making decisions for others was the rootcause  of all the problems in the show. Khushi and Arnav making  decisions for Anjali  thinking her to be a porcelain doll was a big, big blunder. So , I am glad that Arnav didn't do that now.

He let her in . He bared his soul to her. He let her see his vulnerability , his fears , his helplessness an all his guilt . And Khushi being Khushi found all the rights to say to him. She admonished him for trying to carry all these burdens alone , soothed him, made him see sense and assured him that they would find a way out of this together. She became his support-system , his true half in every sense of the word.Smile

 Tomorrow  tomorrow, first thing  in the morning,  you're going  to pick me up, and the two   us, together, we  we will talk to Di.

She took charge of the situation and made the most important and the right decision.

But what I loved was the little Laad Governer moment Big smile.

Have I ever told you how evil you are for leaving me in such a resltless state? * pouts* Confused You could have refrained from teasing me with the promise of revealing the "missing" bit in the next update! How am I going to fare  till  the next update!Cry

 

 

 

 

 

 

 



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Posted: 12 May 2013 at 11:01pm | IP Logged
Oh. My. God. Give me one second to breathe.Day Dreaming
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This was the best chapter you have ever written! The utter honesty their relationship has finally accomplished is so pure and just so...words cannot describe it! I hope and pray to God that I get a life-partner with at least 1/2 of what your Arnav and Khushi has. I love how the shyness and hesitance between the two is crumbling. 

The story is finally moving forward. I can't wait to see the Arnav-Khushi-Anjali talk. It'll be interesting to say the least! 

Thank you for working so hard on these chapters! This is my escape. Please keep writing. I'm greedy for MORE! 

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Posted: 12 May 2013 at 11:02pm | IP Logged
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Great update loved it!

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Posted: 12 May 2013 at 11:49pm | IP Logged
amazing update...love it Wink

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Posted: 13 May 2013 at 2:46am | IP Logged
oh God!!!!! you have updated this one..i am so happy..i was so eager to read more that i keep checking this thread and finally the day came..now the update..its beautiful...the way you have shown the Arnav's feeling ,his fear is touching and Khushi's understanding made me fell in love with her again...thanks for the update and if possible plz accept my buddy req and send a pm for future update as i dont want to miss ur story  

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Posted: 13 May 2013 at 3:16am | IP Logged
fantastic dear:)

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Posted: 13 May 2013 at 3:39am | IP Logged
Wow wat a hearty conversation
Just LUV how they can read each other so well without words spoken
N luvd their bond that has reached a new dimension where there is undying love faith trust care support n need for each other
Lovely update n waiting y khushi misses himWink


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