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Arhi FF|Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| *Complete!* #3 (Page 103)

jtammareddy Senior Member
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Posted: 12 May 2013 at 9:05pm | IP Logged
Awesome update. One single lie by anjali about Shyam's phone call has sent things spiraling . Khushi and Arnav relationship is changing in many dimensions. They can understand each other by one single word what other is trying to do. Arnav has been her pillar for a while now. Now it's khushi's turn.

Thanks for the pm.

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desisoaps05 Senior Member
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Posted: 12 May 2013 at 9:08pm | IP Logged
oh my goosshhh. Definitely waited forever for that update, and choked up reading those words right along with Khushi :')Clap

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Raila1014 Goldie
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Posted: 12 May 2013 at 9:14pm | IP Logged
Here I am tired after a long Mother's Day, in bed with the iPad after turning down my hubby's request to  watch Gamesof Thrones that I simply adore and what do I see?  An update of my favorite FF!   Sleep be gone and I had to read it this even with your warning about the length.  I love it.  Arnav's torture about Shyam and having to choose, to avenge his wife was as usual beautifully penned.  Lots of words but they were needed to describe what he was going through.  And their conversation, uff you are too good at this.  I could picture this so vividly because of how you took the time to set it up.  This is the talk they should have had after the abduction not when Anjali lost her baby in the show.  I love how she reminded him of their wedding vows and how he does not have to fight this all by himself as she will be there with him.
I don't get PM from you, I stalk as I love this story.  It will make it easier if I get PM.

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archa2810 IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 12 May 2013 at 9:19pm | IP Logged
They have come out quite strong

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Posted: 12 May 2013 at 9:54pm | IP Logged
Haiii

That was so beautiful. Heatfelt convo between the both of them. Loved it

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LeenaRocks IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 12 May 2013 at 10:09pm | IP Logged
ohh i missed this so much! 

how i wished things had been this way in the show as well! *sigh*

This was a beautiful update! eager to know what will happen next!


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sskaug25 Senior Member
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Posted: 12 May 2013 at 10:20pm | IP Logged
A nice update. this update shows the depth of their love. Loved how khushi is supporting Arnav and they both will come out of this mess making each other strong and they will protect anjali from that snake.you have explained well the emotions both are undergoing staying away from each other. Waiting for the next update. 

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Posted: 12 May 2013 at 10:30pm | IP Logged
You know, I read the whole update - there were bits that made me smile, bits that made me blush, cry, sigh, grin, laugh... but then I came to the end - and that last bit -  just stand by me, ok? And I'll stand by you. - Poof! That just stole the show! I couldn't think of anything else after I read, just that one line is enough to tell us how far they have come, how the equations have changed. The words, so simple yet so loaded - and the fact that they were spoken by Khushi - not Arnav, but Khushi - that is so telling. She is now truly his better half, ardhangini

And Arnav, oh, I just want to hug him and tell him everythings going to be okay. He has too much on his shoulders, he deserves a break. And love and tenderness and warmth. But, despite being the man he is he did open up to Khushi, he allowed her to see his vulnerability, shared his darkest fears and let her into his life. I love him for that! 

Now what is this "something" he did? You won't make us wait too long before you tell us that, will you? Amazing update Nafisa (as usual! ) :) 

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