Arhi FF|Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| *Complete!* #3 - Page 97

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome awesome update nafisa!!! Love story, read all the chapters in one go!!!! Please update sooonnn!!!!!!!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful update . Hope Arnav & Anjali talk to each other so that the Shyam fiasco is out in the open.
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Posted: 10 years ago
I read the story again after I saw you had updated it after a while. You certainly have a way with writing prose and bringing out the beauty in a passionate relationship. Redemption, after his cruelty to her during the first several months of their relationship is so good to read and it is heartwarming to see their final acceptance of feelings for each other. 
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Posted: 10 years ago
read it in one go...
superb 
beautifulyy written...
plz pm me when u update it...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sigh, after reading this entire story in one go, I seriously find myself wishing that IPKKND had chosen this track instead of the ridiculously filmi kidnapping track. This is so beautiful and real and I can't express it in words how much I love the words you weave- I can't wait for your next update!
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Posted: 10 years ago
nafisa,
iam missing this FF
when r u planning to update this next dear
I know I know u are busy with NYR now - will wait 
I just finished reading all the 48 chapters, once more - I couldn't do it in one shot - infact it took me almost 2 weeks to finish re-reading the whole thing (because of my tight schedule) but I would say the re-read was just excellent - there is nothing, like getting to read this whole thing once again - I enjoyed it nafisa - u r an excellent writer - this has been beautifully written - i would mark this as one of the BEST ffs i have ever read
 
but really nafisa, u need to update this more often dear - its almost 2 years now since u started this - hoping to read an update of this soon after u r done with NYR
thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
Jus read it again. Plz update
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Posted: 10 years ago
A wonderful chapter. loved how khushi ran to him and hugged him and how she said that she is with him and she will never leave him. Now what's Anjali planning?  Waiting eagerly for next chapter. It was a beautiful chapter
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Posted: 10 years ago
After seeing Khushi and Arnav battle out their personal demons ,to finally emerge victorious is extremely overwhelming. 
When Arnav was down and out and Khushi was just a shadow of her prior self , you had poured out the emotions in those updates which used to make me feel so forlorn and now with your precious writing the excitement , the anticipation and the reunion of their love makes me blush like a new bride.
It was so utterly adorable to see Khushi accept Arnav in her wide open arms and to see Arnav being his roguish self was exhilarating to say the least.Their little lovers tiff was too cute.
Coming to the Anjali and Shyam part , well seems like she has fallen in his trap but i have a feeling you will not make this Anjali so irresponsible ..maybe just maybe she has provided him the bait instead!


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Posted: 10 years ago
hey...nafisa..read the whole...i must say u r awesome...loved it...

i have to mention these...u have written...ASR's confession as ."i love u damn it"...and ASR creating a ceiling of star lights for khushi so that she feels close to her parents back then...and in actual it also happened in the serial...wow...girl...amazing...hope to read more and waiting for ASR and ARJ confession...may Allah bless u..