Originally posted by: preethi28
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My patient wait finally paid off! 😊
Sowwy for making you wait...and thank you for your patience!! :D
I reread the previous chapter for the sake of continuity and i can't help but reiterate what an amazing chapter it was! 😊
Oh gosh, really? I always feel so honoured whenever someone says they reread my work - thank you so much!!
The reluctance to part from each other and the resultant restless energy between Arnav and Khushi was tangible .How cruel it is that just after confessing their love they have to stay away from each other.But in their journey together when has anything ever been normal or conventional.It is something to be expected when the woman in love confesses her love to her man by comparing him with jalebis! 😆 Khushi's need to make sure he was coming in with her, stemmed from the anguish of having to part from Arnav was beautiful.On one hand she wanted, scratch that,longed to be with her husband after the monumental happening of their lives. Whereas on the other hand her love for her father makes it impossible for her to follow her heart's longing. So the conflict in her mind and the guilt and restlessness are only natural.
Arnav's thoughts which simply declared what Khushi was to him had my eyes misting.
"Because now, Khushi was no longer an outer entity - she was a part of him. She was carved into him.She was the passionate half of his heart, the impulsive half of his mind, the purer half off his soul."
These words keep sounding in my mind.*standing ovation *
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I am so, so, so, so VERY happy that you liked this chapter - but even more than that I'm flattered and thrilled because you took the time to touch on all the aspects of it that you liked and mentioned them and what you thought of them - that's more than I can ask for and it makes writing this and returning to this a hundred times more worth it! I'm so thankful to have you as a reader, I honestly don't know how to express how grateful I really am! Thank you so much!!!
"You are my wife ...I can kiss you wherever I want whenever I want to "
Words casually stated but by which he asserts his claim on her,and glaringly declares "MINE" .How can a woman's heart not race and thunder when she is on the receiving end of these words.
Reading Arnav teasing Khushi, I had this silly smile on my face even after I finished reading the chapter and I kept reading that part again and again.I loved it that much.Khushi's indignation and outraged words were too good.
Besharam kahike!
*glggling like a lunatic* I was probably grinning hard as I wrote those scenes because I could practically see Arnav's naughtiness in my head - I loved his flirty, naughty side on the show and yup, it always made my dhak dhak overspeed - so I'm super happy you approve and enjoyed it too!! Thank you!!
Very true.Par kya kare tedha hai par tera hai! 😆
Lol that's a very fitting description of Arnav hehehe :D
His intention of diverting both him and her from the gloomy thoughts of seperation made my smile.How has love changed the great Arnav Singh raizada. From ruthless to considerate and thoughtful. Picture abhi baki hai.I am hoping that you finish both the updates that you are working on real soon.Am I greedy. Hell yes! 😃
And I really hope the caller is Khushi.
Sigh, I loved the sweet, considerate Arnav as much as I love the flirty one, and after everything they've been through in this story, I'm so relieved that you like the development and maturity his character has gained. It means I'm doing something right :P Thank you so much!
And lol, in that case I'm greedy too, because I'm dying to write the next parts just to read you guys' feedback :P :D
As for the identity of the caller - find out next time! ;)
PS : I am not ignoring the Anjali part in the update.I am too busy drooling over Arnav, Khushi and their nok-jhok and romance that I can't bring myself to write something serious in my comments 😊
To be honest I wasn't much in the mood of writing Anji too after that Arhi overload - but had to for the sake of pacing the story :) :P
Thank you so much for your unbelievably wonderful and lovely feedback!! You have totally made my day!
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