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OS - AnSh V cockroach..(last part updated) (Page 7)

Chytra Goldie

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Posted: 06 September 2012 at 5:52am | IP Logged

we are waiting.  Where all the members gone???
Don ko pakadna mushkil he nahi namunkin hai !

So please help in capturing our donji so that we can buzz her ears for part -2Wink

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monamie111 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 06 September 2012 at 6:31am | IP Logged
WOW!!! prati...LOL...loved this OS...
this is so funny and sweet Big smile..pls update soon.. and pls do PM me when u will upadte this one..pls Embarrassed

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bhavi_shiv Senior Member

Joined: 02 July 2012
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Posted: 06 September 2012 at 6:51am | IP Logged
thanks for the great story don...lovely nd soo funny meri fav line is that shiv saying me strong hu voh muje pata hai usse thodi pata hai pointing toward Cockroach hahaha sooo funny hope k room k bahar koi aspas na khda ho mahi ya koi aur from shekhar family or they would think that suhagrat turned into chilaorat...lolz. ...kash k yeh sab sachme bv me ho if happen i cud imagine anandi wud say like this appko bhi Cockroach se dar lagta hai?
shiv wud be like nahi aisa nahi hai vo to bas muje Cockroach jyada pasand nahi hai...haha...lolz
thanks again for the atory...pls do write next part...war of the Cockroach 2...

Edited by bhavi_shiv - 07 September 2012 at 4:30am

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Ritushree_Nadal IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 06 September 2012 at 7:24am | IP Logged
its hilarious prati
loved it

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itsRitzi IF-Addictz

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Posted: 06 September 2012 at 7:24am | IP Logged

ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLLOL y i read this so late Cry didnt got time earlier pad kaafi innovative hain maaza aa gaya shiv sayin kapde nikal dijiye OMG ROFLROFLROFLv  and udta cockraoch flight se ayega lol shiv shouting also  yeh sab shouting sunn gharwaale kya sochenge ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL

good job prati thanks to sou u wrote this ROFLROFLROFL

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Don_theEvil IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 4:19am | IP Logged

part 2

Cockroach defense- ansh attack 

Finally cockroach move his direction and settle himself in wall.. anandi and shiv look at his direction. Shiv looking scared but anandi this time with anger


She is fuming herself.. Her self sprit is coming back to seeing cockroach


"Is cockroach ki inti himmat ki ye muje jaitsar ki sarpanch ko aur jaitsar ke collector ko mere pati ko daraye.. ek to ghar mai gus aaya" anandi is fuming in anger


"Shiv" she shout angrily.. shiv turn towards his wife direction.. but his eyes is still on cockroach


"Kya huva" .. he asked surprise with mixed shocked


"Ye ghar hamara hai ya is cockroach ka?"


Anandi said in cold voice . shiv look confused over his wife sudden change


"Hamara hai anandi kyu?"


"Kyu kya kyu? Is ghamadi cockroach ki inti himmat ye hamare ghar mai gusa chala aaye.. aaj is kamre mai ya to ham dono rahege ya fir ye cockroach"


Shiv is amazed at his wife courage. He wanted to clap loud and said bravo bravo


 But he keep his emotion in check and try to make her understand looking back at cockroach direction again


"Chalo fir ham chalet hai is kamre se.. guest room thik rahega.."


"What ham nahi jauege. Ye cockroach jayega' we should attack on him anand replied .. and then aap dariye mat mai aapke sath mai hu'remember aap kar sakte hai.. wo gunde aapke samne kuch nahi to ye cockroach kya cheej hai.."



Shiv look in pride towards his wife.


And said "mai darna birta nahi hu. Muje tumhari chinta ho rahi thi., we should attack him with pillows"

This time its turn of anandi to giving proud to look to her husband.


She said lets do it


She throw pillow on cockroach direction but cockroach being original international player fielder escaped from it. Anandi give glare to cockroach. Cockroach seem smirk back to her..


Shiv throw another pillow in his direction.. this game by played by both team really well.. Cockroach defense is to good more then ansh attack..


Suddenly cockroach change his defense in attack mode.. he take big fly to  window..        Seeing this anandi lost all her courage..and almost stammer.. shiv wo udha fir se..


Shiv scare to looking at cockroach.." oh my god hamari taraf hi aara hai.. anandi hamne use gussa dila diya shayad."


Anandi replies: "ha ha aaphi ne kaha tha attack karege pillow se dekha kya huva.. is se accha tha sorry keh dete"


Shiv replied are ab to khud keh rahi thi ghamandi cockroach. .aachanak se palti kha li' aur kisne kaha tha. ham nahi cockroach jayega.. aaram se guest room mai jakar sote par nahi tumhe cockroach ko bahaga na tha ab bhugto.. 

ha ha bade aaye.. anandi replied immediately.. maine kaha tha kyuki aap dar rahe they.. isliye keh diya tha.. ek cockroach nahi maar sakte..

before shiv can aruge on this anandi notice something else..

 cockroach is not moving stay still looking at them..


Shiv move and cockroach did some indication of moving.. she asked shiv to stop


Stop shiv.. aap hilege to wo bhi hilega.. aap ruk gaye to wo bhi ruk gaya..  


Shiv look back.. "mai kya iska direction meter hu.. jo muej dekh kar hilega. Kamabhkat.. iski to mai.. he grin and look in to his room and finally found biggest weapon to defect cockroach.. Hit cockroach ka safaya turant.. ek bhi cokraoch nahi milega.."

anandi give proud look to her husband and greening ear to ear.. 


He fire one spray on cockroach direction but alas.. Cockroach   prove his multiple talent again.. And escaped like good fielder form shiv clutches. anandi try to hold on shiv hand to giving him right direction. Both are try to to heat cockroach wit hit.. but he keep escaped..



Form downward no one don't know what was happening other are surprise to hearing lot of shouting form shiv room..


All are seating together giving embarrassed smile to each other listing voice from shiv room


Mahi whisper to himself " mai to bhai ko seedha sadha smajta tha.. unhe romance ka r bhi nahi pata ye lagta tha.. par ye to kuch aur hi nikle.. kitni aawaje kar rahe hai.. itne fast.."

All are embarrassed and leave to there room.. only left cm along in hall to wondering herself.. how can anandi will accept shiv so  soon.. jarur koi gadbad hai.. but how can she enter in them room at night. What agar sab soch rahe ho wo sach hai to.. no she don't want to face embarrassment.

here cockroach is still not moving.. and look very disturbed over.. he thought his friend explain him that they are sizzle together.. the chemistry is awesome.. here they are planning to murder him..he just come to see them.. how they look and why people faint to seeing them together..  its better if he leave them with peace.. but no he will never leave until ansh will said sorry to him...

 to be continue.. 









Edited by DonIsback - 07 September 2012 at 4:35am

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Suchi- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 4:33am | IP Logged
rOFLLL!!!!!!!!!!! Seedha saadha romance 


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SiriuslySujal IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 4:44am | IP Logged
LOLOLOLOL... even the cockroach is an AnSh fan LOL LOL LOL And OMG, the Shekhars downstairs feeling really awkward about all the awaazein from the bedroom LOL LOL LOL Excellent LOL LOL LOL

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